AuthorsDen.com  Join (free) | Login 

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Signed Bookstore | Authors | eBooks | Books | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors: Mike Hartner, iRosemarie Skaine, iShirley Woods, iKim Lambert, iR.M. Doyon, iDouglas Dandridge, iRM DAmato, i
  Home > Fantasy > Stories
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Albert Megraw

· Become a Fan
  Notify me of new titles
  added by this author.

· 21 titles
· 16 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Apr, 2009

   Sitemap
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews

Books
· The Lion And The Young Boy

· The Erasers

· The Struggle of the Young Inheritors

· The She Grey Wolf{ except from the book..the clash between good and evil )

· The clash between good and evil.


Short Stories
· Cries on the wind

· the daily battle

· My Harsh and Rugged Land.

· the golden dragon boy

· the flute that changed his world

· Dark Winter nights

· they walked the dark forest

· the three little pigs and the big bad wolf

· the wolf

· Aussie Down under


Articles
· One of the loves of my life

Albert Megraw, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.



he is learning about himself
By Albert Megraw
Posted: Saturday, October 01, 2011
Last edited: Friday, March 22, 2013
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.

Share this with your friends on FaceBook
Share    Print   Save   Become a Fan
Recent stories by Albert Megraw
· the wolf
· Cries on the wind
· the three little pigs and the big bad wolf
· the daily battle
· My Harsh and Rugged Land.
· the golden dragon boy
· the flute that changed his world
           >> View all 15
one twin learing about the other

 

 

He is learning about himself

 

 

 

 

My twin, one who sees much and yet voices not a breath in time.

Seer of much yet wanter of more than can be given.

My twin, one who’s voice is mightier than the whisper of an exploding volcano, rattler of universes, destroyer of nothingness, enlightener.

One who brings feelings never felt or understood, one who brings warmth where coldness permeated deeply into unknown territory.

Twin, bringer of passion and love.

Bringer of fine feelings that shine in the void of the blackest universe.

Bringer of joys yet unexpressed or even felt, breaker of hearts.

Twin, world changer extant. 

The shaker of universes, creator of limitless beauty, a shining star brighter than all the stars together.

Twin, whose smile creates the thundering beat of many hearts and creates torrents of emotions in those he know’s, melter of hearts.

Twin, talker extant, narrator of great things to come, one whose breath creates the universe and whose blink creates endless time.

One who has yet to talk to the deepest ocean in himself?

Twin, the one who when he breaks the chains of silence will shake the foundations of the universe and cause all things to blossom and shine.

Twin, The shaker of universes, creator of vastnesses beyond comprehension, one who’s smile warms the earth and melts the snow.

Twin, One who never commits himself to the wonders of the universe.

 One who will dull his reach for the stars and the great universe yet unseen by him?

Deep passion and vibrant life is there to have should he only look and let himself break the chains of darkness.

Silver and golden rays of lifes won unknownesses await one who looks and smile at himself.

 

 


Web Site: he is learning about himself  

Reader Reviews for "he is learning about himself"


Want to review or comment on this short story?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Membership?
Click here to Join!


Reviewed by Charlie 10/2/2011
I found myself smiling while reading this. I too have written a poem using the "er" modifiers to attempt to define a family member--my Mother. So I'm intrigued by this write, but slightly confused. The word "twins" immediately divides my mind, and reading about "one" makes me think "the other" is to follow. So in my mind, I never know which twin is which, although you state in the beginning it is about one twin getting to know the other. Thus, my mind is always in a state of confussion reading this.

That having been said, I like your writing style; one line builds upon another, creating layers of emotion that take in your readers. You've got some very unique and lovely lines here. I especially love, "One who has yet to talk to the deepest ocean in himself" (referring, I think to the second twin?). At any rate, the poem--because it is a poem, and I hope somewhere in the middle of a long-long story, is well-worth tightening up for your twins to treasure. How to tighten it up is a good question. Good luck with that--and with everything. --Charlie


Books by
Albert Megraw



The Struggle of the Young Inheritors

Buy Options
Kindle, Amazon, more..




The Lion And The Young Boy

more..



Popular
Fantasy Stories
1. Faux Companion
2. FREE AudioBook Fantasy Short Story
3. Lover's Hands Part 1
4. Shadow's Daughter: Flight of the Fox
5. Tales of the Amomancer: Jennai's Ode
6. The Phantom Library
7. Critter Twitter
8. The Old Man and the Daring Kids
9. An Adventure in my own Back Yard.
10. Einstein Man-Chapters One-To Four
11. Love, Myths, and Monsters
12. Out of the Sun
13. Family Brew: a tale of witchery and weddin
14. Tessa's Wish
15. Elephants and Donkeys: A Fable for Our Ti
16. U.S. Supreme Court Rules in Favor of Arms
17. Secrets in Sulsut - Episode I (full versio
18. THE HISTORY OF MANKIND
19. The Hero and the Fiend
20. Beyond the Fence

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.