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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/8/2012 |
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| Lonnie! A true work of art that could only be expressed by someone who lived it. ( Actually most of us probably lived it but you expressed it perfectly) Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/4/2012 |
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Enchanting poetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautifully done, Lonnie! Your phrasing was magic!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Donna Chandler |
6/3/2012 |
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A hauntingly beautiful memory of a lovely day long past.
Donna |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/2/2012 |
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This is truly beautiful poetic expression ~
The flower for your beloved full and resplendent!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
6/2/2012 |
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A sinewy poem with the muscle to bring back a thought or two concerning youth's mistress: inexperience. Once, we are stranded in the future, the gaze of the past is as palpable as we ever could have imagined it. Undoubtedly a memoir written here. Thanks, I needed that.
Starman |
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