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The Audition
By Carmen Ruggero
Saturday, September 20, 2003



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“God give them wisdom that have it; and those that are fools, let them use their talents.”
William Shakespeare



 

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/13/2004
Carmen,

The pen is mightier than the thwart - a sensational write ... top drawer for sure!!

Robert
Reviewed by Judith Bailey 12/14/2003
Laura, er, Carmen-- you have writing talent oozing from your fingers! Yahoo! enjoyed this piece so very much. It was like being inside the head of the hapless Laura. Being in a focus point, one that will bring food to the table where there has been little to none gives the desperation to succeed no matter what. But often the circumstances where one can succeed is just what you've described here. OF COURSE Laura's mind wandered, created alternate scenes, potentials. Especially I liked her finale, and saving grace attitude. Did she get the job?
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/28/2003
Hi Carmen:

I enjoyed this immensely. You have done wonders in this piece. What an eye-opener for me. Now I know that nothing is as easy as it seems. What an ordeal for poor Laura!

Thank you for sharing this story!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 9/26/2003
oh my goodness, Carmen! Poor Laura's ordeal made me realize I'd rather edit a whole manuscript than audition for anything. Your attention to detail drew me right in. The fantastic Liza part is a stroke of genius. I laughed.

Super!
Gina
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/21/2003
Nice! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/21/2003
And I thought getting known as a Writer and Artist was hard! Great write. I felt your characters like a movie was being played before me. Your actress may not have recieved the part but you did!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/21/2003
Love this!!

Love Tinka


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