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Malcohn Enterprises
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0981976409 |
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March 21, 2009 |
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9780981976402
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What if you killed your gods to survive and then the gods fought back?
The Deviations Series
TripStone hates to kill her gods but she must feed her people. An accomplished hunter in the Masari village of Crossroads, she is charged with the ritual slaying of the sacred Yata.
Her comrade Ghost tries to end Masari dependence on Yata meat by performing experiments punishable by death. His jeopardy increases when he shelters a teenage runaway sickened by fasting.
Their worldview shatters when they harbor a Yata woman raised to be livestock instead of a god. But Crossroads itself is imperiled. Hidden in the far woods, a secret Yata militia is preparing to alter the balance of power.
Excerpt
TripStone closed her eyes and squatted by a rotting log beneath a canopy teeming with noisy nests. The young calling for food above her melded into a single, insistent voice, a command from the forest itself.
She thought of home, remembered why she was here.
Today was Meat Day and her family table was bare of flesh. It was her turn to dress in heavy canvas and leggings and shoulder her rifle.
She opened her eyes, bent her body to follow the outlines of the dead trunk, and barely breathed. Blued mountains ringed the Basc-Crossroads hunting grounds, but her gaze was elsewhere, closer to the ground, seeking sustenance.
Light from the rising sun glinted off red hair drawn back in her tightly fixed ritual kerchief woven with ancient Masari and Yata pictograms. TripStone's pelt, grown in the manner of young Masari women, trailed neatly in sideburns to her chin, rounding her mouth in graceful scimitar shapes. It blanketed her neck, warming it in the cold, woody air. Her shoulders, dusted under her vest in red fuzz, ached with waiting.
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Before dawn she had drawn her purification bath in silence. She had laved herself slowly in water laced with fragrant herbs. Heady, floral scent rose in waves of steam from her tub, obscuring the odors of spiced grains and juice drifting in from the breakfast shared by her parents and brother in the next room. TripStone's dining chair, removed from the table, sat empty beside her family's shrine of ancestral keepsakes.
On any other day her mouth would have watered. If it had today, she told no one.
She dressed alone. She lifted her rifle off iron hooks hammered into dark-grained wood. Conversation in the next room became a steady buzz as she polished and inspected her barrel and firing mechanism until satisfied. Like her kerchief, her gun bore both Masari and Yata markings too old for her to understand. The ancient Masari looked more like bird tracks, the Yata like lizard trails. One was angular and succinct, the other a graceful meandering.
Pretty, both of them.
When she was ready, TripStone slung her rifle across her back. Her boot heels thudded on polished wood as she stepped into the family den. Her relatives ceased their talk and stood, then bowed as one in reverent silence. TripStone bowed back, turned, and strode from their cottage, swallowing hard.
She joined other hunters gathered at the edge of Crossroads. Some still conversed beneath tent flaps with census takers who waited to count the dead. Others, like her, gazed sadly toward the hunting grounds. In Basc, on the other side of the woods, scores of diminutive Yata prepared themselves for sacrifice. TripStone tried to imagine their secret rites, if they held any at all. Perhaps they simply bent to kiss those whom they loved and turned away from their huts, leaving their fate to the gods.
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The sun beat down. TripStone's eyes grazed the yellow grass around pasty flounces of mushroom. She prayed for eye contact. She prayed that she be recognized before she killed. She did not question, sure that the gods would send her a good catch. In time.
Woody decay wafted up to her nostrils. She listened to termites munching the fallen trunk, a beetle scrabbling in the crevices. Seen from the corner of her eye, it raced across brittle bark and vanished. Leaves fluttered as the breeze picked up, sounding like a gentle rain. Her nostrils flared, her lips drawn back as scent reached her, and with it her familiar dilemma of whether to laugh or weep.
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Professional Reviews
Lady Emily, Redbud Book Club
Deviations: Covenant is the first of six in a series being published by Aisling Press. Rich character development and fascinating central conflict quickly addict the reader to this story. The author’s tone subtly coaxed me to judge the ethics of the situation comprehensively by virtue of the characters’ widely varied viewpoints. The moral dilemma of the story would easily lend itself to pontification from a less skilled writer.
The plot is too surprising and “juicy” for me to reveal too much, but I will warn that it does have a creepiness to it, ala modern vampire novels. Do set aside time to read the story straight through, as once taken up the book is hard to put down. I found that as the final pages approached I was craving a bit more “meat” to the story, but fortunately the second book in the series is due out in September.
The main character, TripStone, is a hunter for her Masari tribe. She must perform sacred rituals with each kill. Her tribe must kill their gods to survive. Many of the neighboring Yata tribe have mixed feelings about their relationship with the Masari, and hidden in their woods, their secret militia seeks to alter the balance of power. Meanwhile, in the hills above the Masari village of Crossroads, TripStone’s friend Ghost is performing illegal experiments, a teenage runaway is dealing with serious addiction, and a Yata woman is being harbored from an evil “flesh farm.”
Not your usual happy read on a sunny day, but the moral issues are so compelling, so thought-provoking, you’ll thank the author for presenting this perspective.
http://bit.ly/zfpLX
Julianne Draper, Miami Examiner
No, not all the talented writers are published by the Big Houses; well this reader says that’s just too bad because there are some great writers out there, and it’s a shame to think the next John Steinbeck or Bram Stoker, or Virginia Woolf (self-published via the Hogarth Press--housed in her living room), might, at this moment, be toiling away unnoticed, just because big flashy dollar signs are shining a bit too brightly in someone’s eyes to see what a subtle pearl lies before them.
And yet, some do manage to make a name for themselves, even without help from the Big Guys. Take Ms. Elissa Malcohn, a talented and very kind, mild mannered fantasy and horror writer from Citrus County, Florida whose novel Covenant shows some killer talent, and reminds this reader of that paragon of science fiction and fantasy: Robert Silverberg; and her oeuvre doesn’t stop there. No, indeed, it is lengthy and one that could put many writers to shame, with everything from short fiction to poetry, creative non-fiction and a novel manuscript or three to her name; in October 2008 she was keynote speaker at the Florida State Poet’s Association; she has been an attendee at the annual Fantasy and Science Fiction convention in St. Petersburg, the Necronomicon; she has short stories published in a variety of SciFi magazines , while her story “Hermit Crabs”, in particular, was published in Electric Velocipede, a fanzine that is on this year’s ballot for the Hugo Awards (the Hugo Awards, people!); all which can be sampled at her home page. Furthermore, the news came in just a few days ago that Dark Scribe's anthology Unspeakable Horror, has found its name among the nominees for this year’s prestigious Bram Stoker Award—and Ms. Malcohn’s short story “Memento Mori” is among the stories housed within that tome's now-honored pages.
This is huge, heady stuff; congratulations are definitely in order! And here Ms. Malcohn is, hidden away in little ole Florida; one can only wonder, how can so much talent pass by the Big Guys? How can we keep such great secrets to ourselves, and not share them with the world? That, I hope I have done here. Maybe it's only a matter of time before the world at large does find the stars in our midst—or at least, this one? I, for one, certainly hope so.
http://bit.ly/1cvXL
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