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Missing The Shine
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Tomorrow when the sun comes up
My shine will pale
My doors are closed
I've learned the value of passion
It holds the moans of a silent glow

The hard part of loving
The part that fails
The mission of focus that got out of hand
In growing together
Now parted
No value in the vagueness of now
I don't understand

Give me a reason and calm my desires
The ones that are flickering
Pleading for more
For the one who danced with me embraced me
Then felt our love grow

My knees are weaker
Gone are the plans
You know the ones of floating through skies
Smelling the flowers and walking the paths
Hand in hand humming
No reasoning denied

Future and laughter
The comfort and bliss
The fighting that ends in a tenderness kiss
The clutch for a moment
Moonlight all around
The smile so electric
With the shine that I'll miss

My heart is like his
With pride entrapped
Sheltered from love
My what a grind!
Broken down guesses with missives amiss
Barely hearts beat when missing it's shine.

~Susan K. Rowse~

© copyright 2004



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 Reviews of "Missing The Shine"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2004
Ah, love. When love is alive the world is perpetually young a vibrant. When love is in tatters the whole world wears hand-me-down clothes. The sun refuses to shine. No spooin' 'neath the moon. Ugliness abounds.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 23, 2004
Well written emotive poetry Susan!!

Thanks for your ongoing support and caring heart Susan!!

Warm love Tinka

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on July 22, 2004
A superior write Susan, drawn from a well of knowledge...beautifully written...
Allen

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2004
Well-crafted emotive poetry, Susan. Sad, Poet but an excellent piece of work.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 22, 2004
Splendid write Susan!How well you know loves many splendours.
(No sense mentioning its opposites;-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 22, 2004
beautiful imagery and texture ...

Reviewed on July 22, 2004
A heartfelt write. Well-expressed.

Sandie May Angel


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