I lie among tasseled brocade and enhale the passion love has made
Then feel your form break through the air and suddenly you're standing there
I sense your shadow then grab my brush and sketch a line of love for us
This form where sabled bristles flow is tribute to the love that grows
The next smooth stroke is your eyes, they seem half closed, my passion flies
Just then a flow of fuller lips to bend and collect your kissing sips
Bristled golden moonlit night...shines upon this passion bright
Added blues to softer shades, deep within where pleasures' made
Hidden trove with treasures deep awaiting plunges fluids creep
Deep within the sweep of red nerves launch flesh to spew instead
Keep the rhythm hearts partaking and color hunger as it wakens
Oranges and magentas flowing into fruity peaches glowing
Flesh tones fade then turn rosy, flash of mountain laurel poseys
Dandelion- yellowed hair...titanium porcelain skin so rare
Kissing dots upon each ripple hardened berries of crimson nipples
Billowed melons flesh so sweet tender juices ... a lover's feast
Legs of salmon-colored skin opening where this love begins
Freckled, seinna spots laced about with passion... hot
The absolute and firm request from eager urges...better...best
Legs entwined once they merge licking smells and arching curves
Caressing flames that beg "Come Near!" gently passion speaks, "I'm Here!
Opened vees that hug your line splashed on juices...from bold to fine
Sketched with colors in their fashion, glowing canvas of sabled passion.
Author ~ Susan K. Rowse
copyright 2004
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Reviews of "Passion's Canvas"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2004
Erotic and beautiful Classi Susan!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2004
Beautifully erotic and romantic, Susan. An exceptional write.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2004
An exceptionally well-crafted and extremely descriptive piece of erotic polished poetry, Poet! Outstanding creation Susan!
Where do I start? My, O, My, Susan... I had to go back and read this aloud... it fills the head first, then it seemed only fitting that it fill the ears and the room, itself. This is free-flowing, yet, even with long, lingering lines, there is rhythm and exquisite, completely unforced internal and traditional rhyme... The entire metaphor/theme is clever, indeed, and magical in its creativity. I'm quite envious, wishing I could claim this one as my own, BUT... such a negative response has no place here... my hat is off to this original piece. You have managed to combine soothing, even playful mind pictures with bona-fide and bold eroticism.. What a poem! Jaysus, it's grand! katy xox.
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