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Part of Me
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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...that's loving you!


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It's time to move a mountain
It's sitting on my heart
It's strong and firm and granite-like
It's heavy on that blind part
Its knowing that it won't budge
No matter what I do
Its more than I can understand
This part of me that's loving you
I curse myself and shake my head
I discombobulate ...it's true
I'm fighting to redeem my heart
This part of me that's loving you
I like having things my way
And now my thoughts escape
To places that I haven't known
Have I time ...is it too late
I love this feeling except this part
You're far away...it's true
This yearning now is all I have
It weighs my heart from loving you.

Susan K. de Vegter

copyright 2006

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 Reviews of "Part of Me"
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Susan,

Honest, burning emotion and passion; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Passionate and honest; a lovely gift, Susan. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Sometimes that 200-pound gorilla will cause us problems. No easy solutions to these kinds of problems either. Time. That usually works. Sometimes.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Susan
The object of your desires will be left in no doubt of your sincerity and honesty in this passionate write...
You write with burning intensity and passion, the hallmark of a professional writer
Love and Peace
Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Well captured Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Capturing the feelings of longing, desire and love for something so strong is hard to do but in this write you make it seem effortless. The romance in the heart of the one you wrote this for will no doubt be stirred and touch by such sweet sentiments and the knowledge that someone cares that much.

Felix

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
you capture your heart eloquently ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Another excellent piece that stirs the senses! Fine work Susan!


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