Shades of a rainbow in colors you pick
Smiles all in cardinal for kisses that stick
Cheeks all a blush in rosey nosegays
Eyes of azure that sparkle and play
Alive is a word that dresses in love
Cobalts of blue delight skies above
Colors ablaze as in spring all year through
Love a kaliedescope as we follow through.
Yellow the golden that peeks from beneath
Carnellion blossoms as hearts keep the beat
Then footsteps kick stars up from the heels
Walking is proud as the whole spirit feels.
It's sensing and loving, devotion a'stirring
Holding caresses with kissing occurring
It's tongue tied and gossebumps
With hearts whispered...purring
It's birds out of nowhere with flutters a'wing
It's winter with cold all warmed into spring
It's smiles going miles with fancies a'bustling
In colors of love and passion a'rustling
It's rainbows unended with arches of color
Then treasures in hearts and kisses that smother
The hugs and the fingers all woven in two
The colors of romance when love follows through.
Romance in techinicolored, image laden perfection in meter and signature rhyme. After reading, I closed my eyes and just imagined for a while... and the colors behind those lids were passionatly stirred into a swirl...
Love,
Taylor
Color me impressed, impassioned, inspired and in awe of your talent, this write is so vivid each line springs to life as it is read and blinds the reader with it's majestic images. Well done dear sweet friend of mine.
When love follows through where does it lead,
to the hope of happiness if two souls succeed?
When love follows through
does it rescue us from lonliness or need?
This is scary, I could keep writing about it for a long time.
Pierre.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
a white light goes into a spectrum and comes out a rainbow of color, so does your poem. Simply wonderful. Victor
Yes indeed, Susan! Is not love absolutely wonderful? You have expressed it exquisitely in your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
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Love,
Taylor
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
You paint a super picture of soft moods, ambiance and pastel colors in this slick and stylish write..
Peter
Susan
to the hope of happiness if two souls succeed?
When love follows through
does it rescue us from lonliness or need?
This is scary, I could keep writing about it for a long time.
Pierre.
Sandie May Angel :o)
Regis
Love,
Eileen