Sunsets of marigolds...birds on the wind
Love in the songs...echoes that spin
Amor's in the air...aroma of musk
Lovers hold hands...from dawn to dusk
Fountains that flow...waters that shoot
Arrows from Cupid...hearts here to loot
Rhythms that beat...some are off key
Oceans with tides...fish in the sea
Silhouettes bold...up on the sands
This is the spirit...love ever grand
Strutting with pride...heads held high
Struggling for space...do it or die
Nature is having...this spring fling of love
For all of her creatures...here and above
The world is intune so keep your dispair
In tack, for now...amor spoken here
For now those of you that haven't the chance
Get up from your chair...take up this dance
Its up to you...go pledge a cause
Open your plummage...hear the applause
Let down your hair...smile for a change
Top off the hurt...let go the pangs
Give it a ten...hold out those fingers
Reach out for hope...kiss lips that linger
Don't let it pass you...it won't stay long
Open those ears...hear love's sweet song
Watch how the Bluebirds and Egrets go to it
Puzzles of love...find pieces that fit
Learn from this nature...they're teachers too
Sing from your heart...sweethearts to woo
Nest in the bed...of love waiting near
Give it a chance...amor spoken here.
Well, when "Amor" elects to speak with such heart-stealing eloquence and such soul-commanding beauty, what is there left for this humble poet to say except: Amen.
Aberjhani
luv how you blended two poems into one, each side being able to be read as a separate poem ... and of course, the passion and expression of love is just beautiful ...
Susan when you do love you do it up in grand style, for all of us to delight in! You are a gifted talent,always inspiring us to better relationships!Thank you!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Susan,
Inspiring write - sweet hope for love. You have such a way with images - I'll keep 'getting them' for next few hours-aha! <grin>
This is a sentimental and epic story about a young man, injured in the Viewnam War, who returns to Dallas, Texas, in 1964, and begins rebuilding his life. Set against the rock and roll era of the early 1960’s, when casual sex and recreational drugs w
Welcome to Hell on Earth, boys.
Andersonville POW camp...
Russell's battle-worn body looked defeated. He was a Union soldier; she was a Confederate nurse. But when Rosa looked into his eyes, she saw pure determination. He looked fo
Ron
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Love and Hugs,
Taylor
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Aberjhani
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
Eileen
Inspiring write - sweet hope for love. You have such a way with images - I'll keep 'getting them' for next few hours-aha! <grin>
LL*
A pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
Unity unwavering ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
You are at your best in your relaxed and bouncy style of cultured romance...
This is a keeper for the library..
Shalom
Peter
among many
Its up to you...go pledge a cause
Open your plummage...hear the applause
love the attitude here........so true..........love comes in many dimensions........its a gift...........
a keeper
pax A