With the crystal pure drone of passion
When the walls are kaliedescope
When the hours before dawn are taken apart
As life lives once again with hope
When spoken words of passion expel
From lungs burning with fire
When magnolia glows bounce off the walls
And appendages weave and are mired
These are the mornings I wish to return
To securities of a love
The one with the bounce of pulsating rain
As dawn comes in with a shove
Then met with the push of love giving back
In moments of morning's fire
The ones of hearts breaking the silence
Then greeting daybreak with desire.
"As life lives once again with hope" this says it all for me.
It is a give and take rhythm. If two are willing to relinquish than two will discover those things that defy category.
You will find that which you so desire Belle. Paths cross, and minds meld, into that which offers hope to a seeking mind and heart. You have a friend and a confidant.
In fraternity and poetic vision ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Beautiful Susan..Your imagery is getting more tranquil yet very powerful..Great works!!!
You are the queen of poetic melody
All your writes, are so descriptive, in a lovely way, and I think that anyone that has been loved, or did love, or shared love (the best of all possibilities ) and find a part in any of your poetry to relate to. This transcends......
pax A
A story set in 10 years time where two bodies are found in the river NITH in Dumfries, south west Scotland. One is a blind musician and police informant while the other is Poppy, a young girl. It brings Mark and Carla together with different views i
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Ron
Love Tinka
A soft and tender interpretation of love and passion in choice and evocative words
The graphic is beautiful too
God Bless
Peter
"Hours Before Dawn"
A peaceful and serene love song.
Simply wonderful!
Continued success in your writing,
G. A. Thomas
You do know how to decribe
a beautiful morning
Words are perfect
imagery is all.
Love & Peace
Take care,
Sherry
The poetic blend and the graphic work so well, in this heavy atmospheric poem...
It is a give and take rhythm. If two are willing to relinquish than two will discover those things that defy category.
You will find that which you so desire Belle. Paths cross, and minds meld, into that which offers hope to a seeking mind and heart. You have a friend and a confidant.
In fraternity and poetic vision ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Eternal Love, Dove
All your writes, are so descriptive, in a lovely way, and I think that anyone that has been loved, or did love, or shared love (the best of all possibilities ) and find a part in any of your poetry to relate to. This transcends......
pax A