I know you're here this morning
I feel you all inside me
I hear your heart beating it's pace
I shutter but still I believe
Sometimes our passions awaken
To the sensitive side of another
There are moments when life is whizzing us by
As we sit with our thoughts that smother
When a mystery of a provocative chance
Mixes a tingle that reaches the surface
With a knot that sits in the back of the throat
As new senses break free and emerges
It's realizing the chance that's wakening
It's swallowing hard that new thirst
It's keeping impulsive reasoning intact
While you sense your passions will burst
It's knowing the warmth of someone
The fire from the heart of their arms
The smile that breaks into a grin
With security bound with their charms
It's another day for some of us
But a special one for me
A sensing of not being alone
With a spirit alive and free.
You've captured it so perfectly Susan...and if I kept a list of all those awakenings,as I actually did in a poem this morning, you would have addressed every one plus the ones I didn't get to! Love the similarities in those shared mental wavelengths!
Love, Taylor
... and time stood still... and life was changed... forever... How breathtakingly you have penned that microsecond of recognition, that eternal moment of realisation. Most alive and free poetry, Susan, caught up into that divine experience. A moment to take the breath away. TY K xx
Sometimes it awakens slowly; sometimes, it awakens on fire. Like this write, beautifully illustrative verse makes passion come alive! Well done, Susan.
Susan you have combined art and poem to create a masterful scene of love in its many ways. Sensual overtones match the art which is writhing with passion.Kudo's Sis!...Eileen
"A sensing of not being alone with a spirit alive and free" Perhaps
destiny awaits. I have allways been in awe of your writing and this is no exception. Pierre.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
A love poem worthy of great honor. One of your best. Victor
I like this Susan. It reminds of times when I've just known someone special was thinking of me at the same time I was them. Your opening I know you're here this morning, I feel you all inside me really says it well. Passion is a very broad area. Makes me thing of a lot of things.
My spirit is flying eternal
inside your sweet heart to dwell
alone I look out life's window
marvel at your words sensually sweet
linger along your heart's wishes
knowing in spirit we meet...
Beautiful poem had to add my two cents worth, it inspired me again Susan
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Love, Taylor
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
destiny awaits. I have allways been in awe of your writing and this is no exception. Pierre.
I think Anita has got it nailed..
Sensational verse..
Love
Peter
and the poem
optimistic, mysterious.......writen in a quick pace of assurance...
just that cosmic touch, that kindles hope
pax A
inside your sweet heart to dwell
alone I look out life's window
marvel at your words sensually sweet
linger along your heart's wishes
knowing in spirit we meet...
Beautiful poem had to add my two cents worth, it inspired me again Susan
Fee
Love & Light, Dove