I lie among tasseled brocade, enhale the passion love has made
I feel your form break through the air and suddenly, you're standing there
I sense your shadow, grab my brush, I draw a line of love for us
The form with sabled bristled flow is tribute to the love that grows
The next smooth stroke is your eyes, appear half closed, my passion flies
Just then a flow of fuller lips, bend to collect your kissing sips
Bristled golden moonlit night, shines upon this passion bright
Added blues to softer shades, deep within where pleasure's made
Hidden down with treasures deep awaiting plunges, fluids creep
Deep within the sweep of red, nerves launch flesh to breath instead
Keep the rhythm hearts partaking, color hunger as it wakens
Oranges and magentas flowing into fruity peaches glowing
Flesh tones fading then turn rosy, flash of mountain laurel poseys
Dandelion, yellowed hair, titanium porcelain, skin so rare
Kissing dots upon each ripple, hardened berries of crimson nipples
Billowed melons flesh so sweet, tender juices, a lover's feast
Legs of salmon-colored skin opening where love begins
Freckled, seinna spots, laced about with passion, hot
The absolute and firm request from eager urges, better, best
Legs entwined once they merge licking smells and arching curves
Sensual flames that beg "Come Near!" Gently passion speaks, "I'm Here!
Opened vees that hug your line ,splashed on juices... bold to fine
Sketched with colors of their fashion, glowing canvas, sabled passion.
Author ~ Susan Kathryn de Vegter
(c) copyright, 2006 (all rights reserved)
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Reviews of "Sabled Passions"
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
wow Susan your poetry drew me in and I didn't want it to end-lovely
a lot of images and messages in this one--it really sizzles from waist down (middle)! "where love begins" i think is interesting...what kind of love? cheers
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Compelling passion penned across a "glowing canvas."
"I feel your form break through the air and suddenly, you're standing there"
I really like that line...
~Butch
Passion indeed, Susan...this one is lush and alive with it. Hmmmm, I'm inspired to dust off my brushes...and I know just the subject. You've got a yummy masterpiece going on here, brimming with positively voluptuous imagery!
Love and a Happy New year,
Taylor
Had to catch my breath... This is too good.... As always I'm in awe
of your way with words, But this goes beyond... really enjoy this I'm reading it over and over. The Invocation of passion... Love Pierre.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Love tastes like a festive dinner. Lovely poem. Victor
Such sacred sensuality that flows like the painted images you stroked on this lighted canvass for our pleasure. Thank you for such an awesome and passionate write.
hugs
Fee
Well, that certainly warmed up my living space a bit!! Beautiful hues of passion flow through your verses and paint the canvas with romance. Very nice!!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Magnificent! Truly, what an exquiste masterpiece, love Holly
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Painted passion.
Ron
"I feel your form break through the air and suddenly, you're standing there"
I really like that line...
~Butch
Love Tinka :)
Love and a Happy New year,
Taylor
of your way with words, But this goes beyond... really enjoy this I'm reading it over and over. The Invocation of passion... Love Pierre.
Love,
Eileen
hugs
Fee
Take care,
Sherry