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Loving You
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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It's time to try and move a mountain
It's growing in my heart
It's tall and strong and granite like
It's heavy on that blind part
Its knowing that it won't budge
No matter what I do
It's more than I can understand
The part of me that's loving you.
I curse myself
I shake my head
I discombobulate it's true
I'm fighting to redeem my heart
This beat that says "I'm loving you".
I'm used to having things my way
And now my thoughts escape
To places that I haven't known
Have I time?
Is it too late ?
I love this feeling except this part
You're far away...It's true
My yearning now is all I have
It weights my heart from loving you.


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 Reviews of "Loving You"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Susan....very very nice write my friend!!!!

Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Superb heartfelt write! I like this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
O! Susan this is awesome...I think I can relate to this one very much!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Out of all your works, I feel this is truly the best...when you say..."It is heavy on that blind part" Well that is just the kicker...excellently written piece, I enjoyed it much.
Allen

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
I loved this Susan! Very Very nice!!

"I love this feeling except this part
You're far away...It's true
My yearning now is all I have
It weights my heart from loving you."

Jack


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