Give me a little elbow room
With space enough to grow
Won't you tell him that I love him
And then I'll need to go
I don't really love him
You see he is a dream
He opened up a dying heart
Sneaked on in the in-between
The part that was so empty?
He added his own spark
Slowly filled the hollow space
Danced on out into the dark
Then slowly he disappeared
Just where I do not know
Left a woman very wounded
With a need to try and grow
So cautious are her steps now
Treading lightly... thin as air
"I don't love you ... but I love you."
As if he really cared.
Very nicely done, superb dramatic pacing and a wonderful open use of analogy to immediately involve the reader, getting them to feel what you are saying! This is exceptional, Susan!
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage as she is…whether they wa
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