Greater Love of a Lifetime (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Greater Love of a Lifetime
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I hear him somewhere yonder... Where ever he may be I'm full each time I think of him He's everything to me Each time we are together This mystery compounds love The love grows unimaginable With strengths no one can covet. It takes a common bond here Two spirits of one soul Inside where there are no laws Where the passions hold. This bounty for two lovers Who love unselfishly Who move to dance a love waltz In total _ spirit free. With his rhythm caresses He moves with every turn He licks away my mind-set Then eases in a burn. This fire he flames so gently Then slides right on inside We hold each other tenderly Then glide, hold on and ride. I open to his pulses Feel his iron embrace Unfold these passion roses With raw and fluid grace. He licks my frisky moments I shift my lips to taste I slide along his body My hair all in his face. Then to his neck I wander To kiss my way on down Nibble at his chest hairs Then slide out of my gown. His hands embrace my nipples Then beg for a mere taste We know that this is futile Then I nibble to his waste. I want him here inside me Much more than words can say Just as the flesh is pleading We give in to love's sway I move then he moves with me My lips upon his moans The head of him has power My lips grip down upon. This mighty tool of passion This punctuated love This anvil of hearts beating Each push returns a shove. It's one sure love that's speaking This one unlike all others' This heady mind flow breathing Rolling beneath the covers. It's kisses full and deeper As pounding love storms in It's ravished sheets in fingers gripped Just as the juices spend... Themselves in groans from somewhere In tongues that no one knows It's spirits with the one you love As worlds inside explode. Amazing love of a lifetime Timeless lust in bloom Knowing free style passions Will energize this room. There are no words of art here No wisdom or decree It's simple love of a lifetime Two spirits_ him and me. Penned by, Susan K. Rowse � copyright 2003 (all rights reserved)

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

Ode to a phantom love... a passionate and gentle wish for what could-be or what should-be... a sensual walk through a romantic garden of expectation. Very lyrical, very intriguing, and very spiritual. A beautiful write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Susan, your verses are exquisite.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Beautiful Susan.
"I open to his pulses
Feel his iron embrace
Unfold these passion roses
With raw and fluid grace. "

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Beautiful passionate write Susan!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

GREAT lyrical writing, Susan!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Susan....adorable lyrical poetry at its very best....

"It takes a common bond here
Two spirits of one soul
Inside where there are no laws
Where the passions hold.

This bounty for two lovers
Who love unselfishly
Who move to dance a love waltz
In total _ spirit free. "

clap clap clap....real winner!!!!!

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Beautiful, lyrical poety....He is a lucky man.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

There are no words of art here
No wisdom or decree
It's simple love of a lifetime
Two spirits_ him and me.

Beautiful!

Jack

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Passionately moving and very sensually expressed. Thank you. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

wonderful erotic passion...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Susan, A sensual write of love in many facets,superbly crafted!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Susan, so exquisite. Sensual passion from beginning to end. Truly a lifetime experience.
Beeautiful work!