Such a deeply profound & sad poem neatly packaged..Thank U. I loved it!

We left the essence so that we can bask in the warm light of materialistic deciet, so that new detours would take us faster to our destinations which we never intended to reach, which were never our destinations, so that we can be vindicated for wrong steps with the warm covers of old revisions...No one took the trouble to think methodically the way out of the labyrinth.

You have said it all so eloquently and in so few words! Truly sublime, penetrating poetry. Bravo!

This is so true once touched and then when we leave it is so
lonely and harder to go back,.

Excellent emotions expressed...

Lady peg

Beautiful and excellent poetry!

Reindeer

Excellent write.

defintely on target!