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Magical Moment
by Laura Lee Fall → (All Poetry by Laura Lee Fall)
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Laying on a blanket you and I under the trees feeling the warm summer breeze as you feel glee.

Talking and laughing as you place your arms around me.

When the sun goes down he whispers in your ear, “How’d you like to fool around?

I smile from ear to ear and say without delay,”Thought you’d never ask” as we both smile brightly as the moon now shines upon us.

Softly you touch my face, as I feel faint and can hardly wait for an incredible kiss.

Under the moonlight as the stars shine bright above as I feel so loved and know you are the only one truly sent from above.

Enjoying the summer night in such delight as I eagerly await for you to kiss me please and do not tease.

Suddenly your moist lips meet mine as tongues twine and this feeling is so fine.

Soon though we run out of time as the children all come running in between saying,“Can we have Ice cream please!

Then I hear, “Next time a babysitter dear” as the children laugh saying, “Very funny dad”.


I smile and say, “Sounds very romantic honey just a picnic for you and me and not in our backyard the park please!”

However you and I did have a magical moment in time even though time ran out as we sure don’t mind and enjoyed the Ice cream after a wonderful dream.

     

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 Reviews of "Magical Moment"
Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on June 25, 2011
Hmmm, so when's number 5? :)
A real to life situation motion poem.
Delightfully written!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 20, 2011
Creative and adorabe..love this!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 16, 2011
A 'MAGIC MOMENT' SHARED BY TWO...AND...A 'MAGIC MOMENT' SHARED BY FAMILY. TWO MAGIC MOMENTS IN ONE NIGHT...GEE, WHAT A BLESSING! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on June 16, 2011
What an adorable poem! Although the majical moment was interrupted, the thought of having many more such moments is enticing. Delightful read! Joy L. Hale

Reviewed on June 16, 2011
A delight of a poem.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on June 15, 2011
a magical moment indeed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 15, 2011
Sweet thoughts and moments, Laura. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Beautiful reflection!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Laura,
There is magic for sure here,
moments of love and longing and passion
wonderfully expressed.

John

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Oh, Laura, Laura, your words here are so familiar to me because what I'll say to Bonnie is: "Hey, honey, come on,
you wann'a lay down?"
"Sure, baby,"
Bonnie'll say to me.
jumping on the bed,
two dogs come to see.
Nice poem, my friend.
Markie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
lol. Really had me suckered in until the end. Backyard? lol. Love those children. Love it. Liz

Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Great writing, Laura Lee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
So yummy the ice cream
~Laura~
dreaming of such sweet
cones of love in the making

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Nice romantic dream that most parents can easily relate to...lol
fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
Oh my...Breathtaking as always sweet lady ...sighhh ... Awesome writing Laura...please stay safe and always well sweet friend...Hugsss,much love

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
A dream can be magical, for sure, Laura, and this was one of those kinds.


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