SERVANT BY ECHO (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 5, 2004

Great picture...great title...great prose!

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2004

A haunting piece with so much wisdom and observation. Wonderful write

Reviewed on April 5, 2004

...Hanging by a moment, hanging by a thread; the mystical enigmas of the things we've left unsaid...This is wonderful, Lady A, and has the searching qualities of the subject it seeks to express. I, for one, seem to have a mind that spends more time investigating nouance rather than fact and hence am never quite sure whether my "reality" lines up with anyone else's or not??!! KB

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Anita, i could have read this all day and worked out something different each time, this is an amazingly flowing poem that gets the reader to work it out, what they conjour up is another thing but i loved this, i revel in that flow that feeling that its been written in a hurry before its lost forever, a cracking piece, i'm in awe of your mind and where it takes you...Mark x

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Beautiful, just so lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Absolutely beautiful and superb flow to this Anita. You are on a roll :)
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Wonderul write Lady A!

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel ~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

A beautiful write
excellent

William

Reviewed by Gentle Willow (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Not sorry I visited but daunted by your talent. No wonder the poet starves. So much beauty and empty spaces between to fill in with your own thoughts. This is lovely.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

"To bare all true , rehearsed yet new
By ancient shadow's dawn debut
No fears or vanities unbind
Pure love that weaves those of same mind"

EXCEPTIONAL!!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Just beautiful Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

This is such lovely poetry, Lady A!
A most impressive write, beautiful!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Lovely. And it has a certain air of mystery.
Encore! Encore!! 'Pea de la Pod' <3

PS: Spot-on about the jalapenos, girl.:)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

You are one mesmerizing, thoughtful poet. I suppose the word "transport" is overused.. BUT.. if it's the right word, so what? This poem transported me.. there, I've said it and I'm glad! (smile) Wonderful piece, indeed. katy xox.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Stunning, Lady A!!!! "I am servant...to thoughts and words
Unspoken, yet by spirit heard" Ah, this brings up a whole new world, doesn't it?! Excellent write! Peace.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

This is fantastic and so well crafted all of it Ladye A~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

I'm with Jude and I times what he says by at least a lot. You choose. This is great. Love and peace to you, Anita. (I think I am guessing at your name or it just came to me from you via ESP). Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

very beautiful poem ...

to thoughts and words
Unspoken, yet by spirit heard
Of whispered echoes

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

Beautiful Anita..really lovely flow in this..
floria

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

I love the way your words flow, so easy to read. I love this Lady A!

Jack

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

Absolutely beautiful Anita.......ty, Dani