M the Molecule A the Atom (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

I like this... and with sly reference to that classic, "The Dot and the Line"... nicely done. And by the way, everything that is not something else... is zucchini (thanks for the review). Bob

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Wonderful write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

This is so very unique, enjoyed this Lady A.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

(((lady a)))

moldie oldie, but a goodie :) *enjoyed*

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *continued prayers!*

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Dear Lady A,

Interesting and different.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Sounds atomic to me! This is super structures and their passion and who better to give us the poetry of these might mites but you !
Susan

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Whoa! Is the neutron and proton in cahoots
with the electrons to posses the Atom?
Too bad I dropped physics. lol oh well...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

You're da bomb! You've got flow. I like it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Aaabsolutely Interesting!

But hey, no quote??!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

yup trivalent and pentrvalent bonding are like mini wars

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

This should be inscribed on the walls of every school chemistry and physics lab up and down the country! Then, maybe, sciences would become cooool again! I reckon you would look good in a pair of half-moon rimless specs and a white coat, Dr Anita! Not just a pretty face... there's a whole lot of thinkin goin on in that fertile mind of yours and I like this novel theme. Perhaps we should instigate a "Science Day" at the Den?! Think that would be my day off! Clever you - neat, bubbling write - Eureka! Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Good one Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

I failed chemistry.....But damn woman if you don't open mah eyes!.....This is stunning!

ty, Danielle Maree

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Thanks for the lessons........

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

atomic splendor ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Very creative and well written!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Very well woven and crafted Lady A
A lesson in educational verse
Peter

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Lady...very witty and clever of you...I really enjoyed this one...Fletcher B

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Lady A Scientific splenderific,I love molecules
and atoms they make a great bombarding bean soup!;-)
You are so creative I had to poke a bit of fun!;-)

Muuuaahhh;-)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

OH, I love this one it is creative and Oh so good Oh I have an Atom too smiles.

"
Electrons are aggressive, and neutrons are relaxed
Protons carry music......expanded curves contract!

The molecule has phases depending on its chamber
And alters like the moonlight,as heaven's highest sabre
Colors, smells, and boiling points, freezing points and more
The atom and the molecule, have found a sincere rapport"

Excellent Lady A~

pax LP