Love Is Always....And Begun
Reclined and primed beneath the peak
Underneath the shaft's physique
Bedrock cleft as sheath for summit
On the passions of the plummet
By the shakes and quakes of earth
Solid rock would probe on worth
Before the mark of counting time
The mount of love was ever climbed
Warmed by mists of hazy dusk
Peaked and mounded, draped in lust
Moistness soothing on release
Climax shadows blend in peace
Firmly anchored and attached
Steadfast catch, the perfect match
No chance of drifting far away
Love has chosen where to stay
Side by side beneath the skies
Windsongs carry lover's sighs
Reflected in a twlight sun
Love is always.......and begun
Pax
A
9/12/06
~Linda
Love tinka
Love it!
And a very good one it is.
ET
I salute you for taking art, moving it around with words and painting the awesome climax.
susan
Fee
Again you bespatter everything around me except your scintillated verse. I am sure that the artist must be quite enamored with the interpretive fortitude of this piece.
You possess a mind unparalleled in this writers mind. Squeezing different ripe fruits together as the ink of simile, your quill seeks out those lands unknown, and when they are found, you write how they look, and feel, and smell.
I see a colorful scindapsus as adornment around the tent where you create, and a pure well of water that you dip from.
Such beauty can never be contained, it must be shared, and in the sharing, it is those peaks of grandeur that the writer attained in the writing of the piece, that must be experienced by the reader.
Having said this, I commend you Alice from the Land of Wonder, and promote you to GODDESS OF THE PEN.
Thus it is spoken and done forevermore. Amen! Bergman agrees too!
You Rock!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Aberjhani
Very comforting and reassuring in a romantic and passionate form..
You did well
In Fraternity
Peter
Love To YOU BOTH,
Dove
You did a wonderful job on this one.
By the way, I think the comic approach would have been interesting, too.
God Bless,
LEw