I have always found a passionate yearning that can never reveal itself is a very painful experience. Sexy, powerful poem that describes that yearning all so well. ~ Sara
Whoa Anita... the heat is surely ON...this is hugely sensual and wow have you blended your words in fabulously fashioned steam...And to think from the title, I thought it was going to be all about Halloween....must be the child in me, but I let the woman read a few times. Sizzle....
xo Taylor~
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
This is hauntingly well expressed for the season just right....
Joselyn
I've got one of those entities (he wishes lol)...but she's nowhere as sensual or as delightful as this Phantasma-erotica (ooo new word?)lol. Excellent write Anita
Very nice, Anita -- I especially adore the line, "There in the corners of never and always..." Geez oh man, that's beautiful. I wish I had thought of that (wink).
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2006
I'm sending applause...so well written. A sizzl'in keeper. JM
Many a heart have been yoked by the whisper
Of love which was there, yet unreal
What better than to be joined to love - genuine,limitless, undying love. My understanding of love was distorted in an era and perhaps culture that did not believe in wearing its heart on its sleeve. In our somewhat pragmatic, stolid household love was not whispered nor was it touched, approached, given or recieved. To think of love any other way was to be idealistic - that was me to a T, an idealist with a cause: to be haunted by the ideal of love, real love, even unto madness...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2006
Prolly burned themselves to death, then came alive as zombies and got
natural citizenship in oz, and ate up all the peeps, so we can use it once again as intended. Gotta send our muslims somewhere..
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
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This is an awesome poem, especially when read aloud, because of the wonderful metre and rhyme that flows so naturally from your pen.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Peace. Joyce
xo Taylor~
Joselyn
Paul;-)
Eerily beautiful and sensual. It's an entity in itself.
You are a talent.
Elizabeth
Love a magic....humming!
Susan
Congrats!
Chanti
Love,
CJ
I love It
A masterpiece a sure keeper
By the way
That was no try
You the boss
Love & Peace
William
You have pulled it off..
Ths is a humdinger of a romantic pen, highly original with just the right sprinkling of passion and sensuality..
Way to go poetess !
Peter
God Bless,
Lew
Rusty
Fee
Of love which was there, yet unreal
What better than to be joined to love - genuine,limitless, undying love. My understanding of love was distorted in an era and perhaps culture that did not believe in wearing its heart on its sleeve. In our somewhat pragmatic, stolid household love was not whispered nor was it touched, approached, given or recieved. To think of love any other way was to be idealistic - that was me to a T, an idealist with a cause: to be haunted by the ideal of love, real love, even unto madness...
natural citizenship in oz, and ate up all the peeps, so we can use it once again as intended. Gotta send our muslims somewhere..