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· Beside Still Waters

· Under Amber Skies

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· Finding Ricky's Voice

· Worries Are Like Small Potatoes

· Five Generations of Women, Five Generations of Strength

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· A Mug of Dreams

· The Man in Gray

· Parsley Rabbit Learned a Life Lesson

· All I Want for Christmas....

· The Grand Prize

· The Magic Bunny


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· Love Letters for Valentine's Day

· Daddy’s Spirit Keeps Fallen Fathers in Children’s Hearts, Year-Round

· Broadcasting Relationship “Status” (on a shirt)? Is It Funny or Desperate?

· Resurrecting Love at Easter: Is It a Good Idea?

· The X’s & O’s of Love & Romance

· Relationship Obituaries: A New Way to Move Forward?

· Marriage Proposals by Women: Tips and Is Trend Really for Leap Year Only?

· The “After-Valentine” Valentine’s Day

· Valentine’s Day Gifts: Are Secrets and Surprises Taboo?

· Re-gifting (for the Right Reasons)


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· Fleeting Verse

· As I Was Leaving

· A Letter to Emily

· Empty Box

· Flying Free

· Life As I Now Know It

· For Susan Bachman – Missing from Pennsylvania

· Soft Light of Solitude

· Budding Relationships

· The Heartfelt Gift

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Lament

by Jill Eisnaugle — Read all 611 poems by Jill Eisnaugle

A lament to match my mood.

Monday, January 16, 2006


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She strolled into the bitter chill
And climbed atop the rolling hill,
The night was dim; the winds were shrill
But, she was sure to stay until.

 

The dark of night became the dawn
And sunlight danced across the lawn,
Nothing could hurl her spirit on -
That was the place her heart was drawn.

 

For many years, that was her home
Her love in life; her place to roam,
A site so rich in wealth and loam
Bathed only by ivory sea foam.

 

Upon the cliff, a sprawling tree
A place for shade that all could see,
Where redbirds joined in groups of three
No better place on earth could be!

 

The sunsets were of glory there
The sights, the smells; beyond compare,
Yet, candidly lost in a stare
She sat amid the frosty air.

 

With pen and paper in her hand
And pencils resting on the land,
She etched her life, as she had planned
In rhyming verse by God’s Command.

 

She sat beneath the sprawling tree
As someone with a heart, set free,
And by the morn, she would agree
She gave her all to poetry. 

 

Her writings spoke of hope and peace
Small butterflies and flocks of geese,
Of harmony and sweet release
And billowed clouds, in cotton fleece.

 

The winter wind might blow and blow
Her verses to improper flow,
But syntax rested far below
All that the poet chose to know.

 

The verses she had scrawled by pen
On notebook pages, razor thin,
She would write twice and once again
Until her final day had been.

 

For she had viewed the joy that came
From finding her creative flame,
No reward or great sense of fame
Could cease her personal acclaim.

 

So, late at night in bitter chill
Once more, she strolled atop the hill,
With writing dreams, left to fulfill
And there, she’d surely stay until.

 

Her inkwell had at last run dry
And ‘twas her time to say goodbye,
Then, to the Heavens, she would fly
With rhyming verse, her lone ally.

                                             

© 2006 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection

 
 
 
 
 
 



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Reviewed by Cles Wilson
Reviewed on January 19, 2006
You are indeed gifted. I enjoyed your poem. The picture is beautiful.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 18, 2006
Strikingly beautiful, Jill. One of your best.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Jill I love this...this is quite lyrical sis...would make a beautiful song!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 16, 2006
The beginning went right to a perfect sad and lonely ending but bittersweet to the reader. very well written and expressed.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
You have penned amazing rhyme in this wonderful poem, Jill. A bit of a taunt I would guess, at those who think that rhyme is a hundred years dead. Since I write in both free verse and rhyme, I will say, rhyme is much more difficult, especially if I wish to keep the poem cohesive. Rhyme causes the words to sing and to play into the meter delivering a backbeat and developing a cadence within the verses. When I write with both rhythm and rhyme, I feel as though I have each reader by the reins and I am pulling them through my poem and into the place from which I had written it. I will not knock free verse, as I think that the looseness of structure allows us to broaden the spectrum of the poem without having to add additional stanzas...perhaps a more profound and direct statement...but never with the beauty and grace of the rhyming, metered poem.
Take care,
Sherry


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