Breathless Whispers (poem) by Denise Edwards on AuthorsDen

Breathless Whispers
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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A collaboration with William Bonilla

William **** You are, true love Your most beautiful voluptuousness I crave next to me Secure me within your tender embrace Whisper to me, incoherently Your most intimate desire As your flesh melts Within my embrace So I may Conquer your soul In the darkness of this Autumn night Let the harvest moon Blesses us While witnessing the art of true passionate love. Denise ~~~ You, love, you are as solid oak,* A mighty cedar, your hardness A compliment so my softness You are skin, warm by day Hot by nights of secret fires May no thing ever dim this piercing passion in your eyes Nor the fierce beating of your heart pressed so close to my breasts as you take me to paradise Your breathless whispers burn to my soul And there is this love where I lay With you, there is this love." William ~ ~ ~ ~ I stare at beautiful brown eyes Drowning in tears of passion Looking deep into your soul As I place succulent kisses Upon the lovely face Of a fallen angel I dare hold in my hands Your tongue I slowly devour Continuing my gentle assault Tenderizing Your silken cinnamon skin My lips travel the length Of your every curve As you moan incoherently Savoring pleasures unknown There you’ll find this love.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 26, 2008

Excellant collaboration from two of the den's finest...hot and spicy just the way I like it.
Fee

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Smooth and yummy, like peanut butter and jelly, a super great combo!
HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy

very nice, lovely sentiment take care

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

William*
Thank you, but the pleasure and honor are all mine. I only followed your Masterful lead! Without your passionate touch, this would not be such an elegant piece of poetry! Thank you!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Denise and William, Very lovely and passionate collaboration. Bravo, You two shine in this piece.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Denise

It was a great pleasure to have joined you
In this wonderful collaboration you have designed and created
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Oh my, indeed! A keeper. Rebecca

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Oh my,breath taking ,excellent writing from to great people...be well and safe always too both of you...Hugsssss