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Green eyes (Repost)
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*Green eyes stare down at me eagerly* *I whisper your name breathlessly* *As I drift on passion’s sea* *Love fills my heart as you fill me* *Joined as one, as it should be* *Forever is promised silently* *As we touch with such urgency* *And kiss ever so passionately* Our bodies tingle hotly * *As we know each other intimately* *Our hearts pound excitedly* *Our bodies entwine unitedly* Seared together tightly Moving, building slowly *Towards the shore of ecstasy* *Take me, make me, and love me* *The woman I am, complete me* *Strong hands touch me so tenderly* *Love me always so dearly* Give to always so freely * *The smile you give so warmly* *The love you give so openly* *I dream of her, forming inside me* *Our love made whole, our baby Anna Lee* *Half you and half me* *A warm sweet smile like her mommy* *And green eyes like her daddy* *Oh! How happy we will be* *Especially me, when I look around and see* Two sets of green eyes staring lovingly back at me

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on September 28, 2008

True emotions so artfully displayed....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Linda Law

Wow... really nice. intimate. lindalaw

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy

Beautiful this sounds sweet, Nice Read - take care

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

I have green eyes, and can relate to the song by Cold Play. I love your poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Beautiful like a green diamond.

Best wishes

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on September 27, 2008

Beautiful writing sweet lady.....have a great evening...Hugsss

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

A captivating poem, Denise. I can hear the song "Green Eyes" by Coldplay as I read your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis