William
~*~
Last night
the Moon was full,
shining so bright
a hot summer
a soft dark night
moonbeams,
searching for my heart
like tongues of rays
between the trees
eerie night
moon so bright
thoughts of you
deep in my mind
within you I felt
loved
in due good times,
silvery moon
please hold me so tight.
~~*~~
Floreann
~*~
Last night
I was gazing at the moon
counting stars
missing you
knowing you
were doing the same
in time we shall be
together as one,
under the stars
beneath the sun
loving you
has begun
holding you so tight
all night.
~~*~~
William Bonilla
And
Floreann Cawley
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Reviews of "Full Moon (Collaboration)"
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
I like the way your styles mesh, but voices are separate
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Kudos!
tony
Trixie :)
as the words you scribe.
your ink as dark as mine
Will my love survive yours
Before the silver bullett strikes
William
~Chrissie