Zachary picked me up at 6pm.
We rode in the car for awhile.
We got to our destination.
The 1844 house on route Eleven.
We walked in holding hands.
We were asked about our reservation.
Our watress was a nice girl. She took us
To a nice little white dinngroom.
Showed us our table.
We looked at the menu for awhile.
Then we said grasce.
Our appetizer was srircha chicken.
It was so delicious.
We ordered our dinner sea scallops with
Green peas risotto that melted in your mouth. It was very delicious.
We had a pink drink.
A margarita. With a flower in it that you could eat.
We just talked to each other.
We talked about the first time we had a meal together. About my poetry book.
That Zachary is helping me with.
It was so nice to just spend time with each other. Relaxing enjoying time spent together. Making a memory.
Sharing special thought.
Our sorbet was so delicious.with peppermint in it.
It cleaned our palate.
Our dessert was very scrumptious.
The dessert was Charlotte au chocolat.
It melted in your mouths.
You could just savor the taste on your tongue for awhile.
We took photos of each other.
Then Zachary drove me home.
Zachary gave me a kiss goodnight
That was our date.
Just wondering who is that "you" you are referring to in your poem. As you both were eating the dessert, shouldn't you have said -
"It melted in our mouths.
We could just savor the taste on our tongues"
and not you, or your?
We "rode" in the car for a while, NOT road.
"We ordered our dinner sea scallops with
Green peas risotto that melted in your mouth." - our mouths, NOT your mouth. You are the ones who are eating the scallops.
Relaxeing is spelled wrong. It should be Relaxing.
As always, please use spellcheck for grammar and spelling before posting.
Erotic Interracial/ Reincarnation/ Suspense]
Gale Sinclair is a marriage counselor who has broken the cardinal rule of psychotherapy and fallen in love with his client, Zoelle Sutherland.
Share
Print
Save
Follow
"It melted in our mouths.
We could just savor the taste on our tongues"
and not you, or your?
We "rode" in the car for a while, NOT road.
"We ordered our dinner sea scallops with
Green peas risotto that melted in your mouth." - our mouths, NOT your mouth. You are the ones who are eating the scallops.
Relaxeing is spelled wrong. It should be Relaxing.
As always, please use spellcheck for grammar and spelling before posting.
Sandie