I’d love you if I could, the one I would
imagine as you are, prefer the way
you were, to whom I’d wish you'd be, or should;
See what you mean to me, fantasy fey?
I’ve adored you from afar, wherever
you are. Would I know you if I saw you?
We wish! - But, I’m sworn to you forever!
Without you, incomplete! What do I do?
Wonder and wander, wistful, to what end?
A romantic malcontent, caught in thought
of the mythic lost man my dreams transcend:
Heroic, of ethics and ardor wrought.
You are he, but who are you, will I see?
Don’t make me wait more lifetimes. Do not flee!
very skillfully crafted poem ...i empathize with the realization that we must sometimes have to wait many lifetimes before we can find our true love though we are merged with each other through time and space ...
Beautifully written and said. I commend you for writing "Worshipful whimsy" becuase it epitomizes the silent longing and desire of all women of all ages and all times. Every word every sentence is aligned with this beautiful and most sacred of emotions. Without love we are nothing. You are beautiful, romantic, and full of life. May the Gods smile upon you and hear you! This is my wish and blessing.
There is Shining Knight calling you "Where art thou? Where art thou?"
he was born and is waiting as well.
Cheers
Alain
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2004
Oh Yes! Sounds like 'my' Mel Gibson in 'Braveheart'!!!!! LOLOLOLOL!!!!!
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
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Carmen
Have missed your top class work and the art is superb too!
(Thanks for congrats;-)
And I enjoyed how you put it to words
many loves,
Evan
There is Shining Knight calling you "Where art thou? Where art thou?"
he was born and is waiting as well.
Cheers
Alain
A lovely write, with an exquisite pic!
Elizabeth