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Whites Of Their Eyes
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Did you ever wonder why humans have white surrounding the iris of our eyes? This poem was inspired by an editorial in the New York Times of 1/13/07 by Michael Tomasello


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No bonobo, chimp, nor orangutan

Has eyes set in orbs of white.

Gorillas eyes, like forest’s “Old Man”,

Mimic those of the troglodyte.

 

None of the great apes, save man,

Have such attention arresting eyes:

Their direction of interest or plan,

Obviously on specific prize.

 

In any niche of environment,

Qualities that give leverage —

  As all vie for sustainment —

Expand fertility, on average.

 

This leads to compounding —

And white-eyed fecundity

Recursively redounding

To the benefit of pallidity.

 

So our eyes have a white edge

By compounding colorless shape.

But by what lever did that wedge

Give advantage over another ape?

 

The key lies in observation:

Apes don’t follow the gaze

Of keeper’s eyes’ activation —

Unless her head also sways.

 

But human young, juxtaposed,

Often follow eyes direction,

Yet head turning, eyes closed,

Evokes little interest correction.

 

Eyes tell what is being thought,

Accelerating word association —

The object with what’s taught —

Facilitates verbal appropriation.

 

So that first chance accident

Separating iris from orbital skin --

In that distant antecedent —

With lighter color, let us win.

 

Verbal skill — human agglomeration,

Lets us talk, read and write —

The learned tools of cooperation,

Ours, ‘cause our eyes turned white.

 

© 2007 R. Leland Waldrip

    

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Whites Of Their Eyes"
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
I agree with the learned tools of cooperation.
Such a need for that we have I believe and the
eyes are so powerful. "Lets us talk, read and write---"

Reviewed on January 16, 2007
No wonder we're the only species who can cast an "evil-eye" on our fellow-creatures, LOL!
Here's something I'd never realized, my dearest friend - the process behind the "whites of our eyes", and that it really was one supposed to have placed us "beyond"! It is a wonderful thing that you explained this to us, and may we now reflect seriously upon this, in order to fully understand that this growth of the sclera was - is - indeed a gift of nature and that such gift was - is - one of evolution; thus, may we use it, in fact, to go "beyond"... and not to go "backwards" (for the "eye" in our rear doesn't even have a sclera... is totally dark and blind, LOL!). With all this, my friend, you have taught me a lesson that I'll keep like a precious treasure, always, and you have even inspired a poem I posted yesterday. "See" how you are? LOL!
Lots of {{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}}} and Love,
Alexandra*

Reviewed on January 15, 2007
I am so overwhelmed and knee deep in alligators that I haven't had time to read or post but I was compelled to read this excellent piece Leland. PLB&G for caring about those whites of the eyes and sharing. Happy new Year. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Good lesson. If we didn't shoot until we saw the whites of their eyes, maybe we wouldn't shoot at all.

Ron

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
This is so well done. Thank you for posting. The learned tools of cooperation YES!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
This is certainly and "eye opening" write, Leland. It makes the reader think. Fascinating thoughts. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
WOW Leland this is fascinating....my oh my...THANK YOU for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
The eyes mirror the soul....enjoyed, Leland.

Hope you are doing well...

Elizabeth

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
As fascinating a concept as I have read in years. And a blissful marriage between science and poetry - rich food for thought. Thank you, my friend, for this rare experience.
CJ

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
A fascinating piece, Leland!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Outstanding Write~
You have opened "Whites of Their Eyes" with a challenge to the newest Equatorius genus, linking man and ape, and enriched the seperation with a verbal ensemble not only with your words but also your wisdom...my eyes are opened wide!
Take a bow, dear Poet~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed on January 15, 2007

Reading You, Sublime Poet -- is like listening to a musical concert of VOICES -- of science, art of Fine Letters and poetic magnificence.

I CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY THE PULITZER PRIZE BOARD'S MEMBERS CAN'T FIND YOU, if Erato, Euterpe and Apollo meet You everyday!

"Whites Of Their Eyes" is another FLOWER for the VASE of Poetry.

In gratitude and admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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