Hold Back the Night (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 11, 2006

good one

Reviewed on June 11, 2006

There no greater feeling than that kind of anticipation, ET. Oh wow...does this one touch the senses and the sensual. Forget the evening, ET..it works any time of the day, LOL...and so vastlky so that the imagnation almost hears the knock before it comes. I loved this ET...more, more!
Taylor

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 10, 2006

The sensual anticiption in this steamy write is palpable...fabulous piece Eileen, a keeper!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2006

And that door opens at just the right moment, passion and lust intertwined in this one to make for sensuous poetry.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 10, 2006

Marvelous poem, like a dream you wake up,when you finish reading it. GBQ and your family and friends

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 10, 2006

No one says it quite like Eileen, you reel me in Milady.
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

ah, the power of anticipation!

great write, Eileen.

Gina

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

Beautifully written, Eileen. One yearns with you.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

wonderful poem ... makes the reader's heart soar ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

You could have ended this poem with the first stanza and it would have been complete...The rest of the poem floats in like a dream in a half sleep where longing and desire paint a portrait of love. Beautiful work.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

Quite a romantic flow you have going here, eT. :-) Smooth as silk.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

The romantic in you shines in this write.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

A sensual fast moving poem which made me hot and steamy,I am jealous as there is no reason here to 'hold back the night.'
My favorite lines were :'My heart fiercely keeping its beat
Resisting the onset of evening
I try to hold back the night'
and also the lines I wish I had written were:'Lazily fondling each other until you rise again
To take me once more to higher realms
Finally... the door opens, you are here...'
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Wow,a wonderfully sexy write!
Love to you and yours always
from
kay.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

you are such a romantic lady, Rufuz is getting all turned on & wants to meet you...;) rufuz & ED

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

True romance. Recognizing the burn in your heart is real and holding true to the vision of things to come is all that is required to reach the ultimate source of our hearts desire. Beautiful writing. :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

I'm always miffed. How do you do this with such consistancy...
btw, great to see dove back....

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

These are my thoughts too!
The picture looks like home. Wow!
Susan

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

So beautiful..Thanks angel for sharing..!!

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 9, 2006

Eileen
A breathtaking and stupendous ode to true love...
Can feel the yearning and craving throughout the thread of the poem...
Complete with superb graphic
Peter