You touch me With strong hands In shades of summer tans Kiss me with Burnt bronze lips As our tongue tips Meet to explore I absorb the essence Your manliness exudes Racy rapacious rum Making my body hum and it responds with an Electrifying earthquake Of epic proportions As the Sun explodes The Moon bleeds The Ocean Erupts Tsunami occurs Planets collide Stars fall and We complete Creation
Aaaaaaa Eileen..THAT'S what Twin Flame connections are all about..to make love( with ALL the aspects of one's Being) so that all wars end..THIS is why Twin Flames are connecting in this day and age in such enormous numbers..
Truly only pure deep love can bring about the SHIFT!
This is profound poetry..love it!
Vesna:)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2006
You should be writing erotica girl...this sizzles.
Elizabeth
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2006
Being roasted by the sun in this heat wave. My body hums, like a roast on a spit..lol
Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2006
Nice erotic energy here.
Reviewed by Paul Shakespeare (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2006
WOW!--What an EXPLOSIVE WRITE! (You can practically visualize the "BOMBS GOING OFF!" in this poetice scene of SEXUAL ENERGY being released! [KRAKATOA re-lived!]...you talking about "orgasmic ejuaculatums" of enormous porportions! ... <naughty smile>
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
B&R
LOVE Tinka
A turbo charged and passionate write..
Can feel the reverberations from here...;)
Peter
Myrna
Now yer talkin!!
loved it!
:-) shoma
Truly only pure deep love can bring about the SHIFT!
This is profound poetry..love it!
Vesna:)
Elizabeth
All the best;
Roger Williams
~~martin~~
Susan