Satin robe falls to floor in moonlit glow shadows ebb and flow together mating desire for sating anticipating fiery touch traces empty spaces music exotic and slow causes a fiery halo soul stirring scent loves sweet torment floating in the breeze of trembling trees a mind of mystery fulfills its history the poetic voice a matter of choice bodies entwined with love divine as a lark descends the evening ends
Very nicely done a vivid colorful portrait and very
Romantic full of passion and sensual desire
Excellent imagery and flow love the tone
Beautifully written
Absolutely enjoyed this poetic view of
Your thoughts my friend!
Love and Peace To You Always...Morning Star
This is heavy indeed,,,but hey!!
Once
The playground of many
Fields and heaven
Gauze…
Melancholic view
Bevy of larks
Survey of high priority
Golden horizons now gone
Not translucent anymore
As a barge of obsidian
Sluggish volcano glass
Slowly covers up reed’
Once again
The power of nature
Has spoken
This is exquisite and saved, the theme and meter blend superbly with the music. Lady M ...do you have mischief on your mind? ;) Transported ty, love Imp x
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Eilenn, this whole package is beautiful. Enjoyed.
Hugs, Laura
The lark has such a beautiful call and this would serenely capture the ambience of this romantic interlude between two. The art you chose is warm and beautiful for this poem Wonderful EILEEN!!!!!!!!!!! Moment capture in sound, view and reading .....
The ambiance you have created with sound byte, and thoughts, and image, is masterful sugar chum. This is classic ET Waldron! You are one unique kinda girl - you know that? Brava!
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Aberjhani
Nice and lovely write....
Lurve ya!
At school for a feww. Kids are
on Spring break......
Wendi
erin
Romantic full of passion and sensual desire
Excellent imagery and flow love the tone
Beautifully written
Absolutely enjoyed this poetic view of
Your thoughts my friend!
Love and Peace To You Always...Morning Star
Once
The playground of many
Fields and heaven
Gauze…
Melancholic view
Bevy of larks
Survey of high priority
Golden horizons now gone
Not translucent anymore
As a barge of obsidian
Sluggish volcano glass
Slowly covers up reed’
Once again
The power of nature
Has spoken
Love Tinka
A romantic and passionate piece Eileen.
Hugs, Laura
a lovely passionate write
enjoyed
Love & Peace
William
Erotically sensational!
Thanks
Dan
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love Josie
Light and Wisdom ...
GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!! Beautifully penned passion: well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
When the moon goes home, our shadows follow.
Atmospheric.
Dai