Passions Juice (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 12, 2007

Wow, et! This is beautiful and goes with your picture. The words are so succinct and to the point; that tells me we can "play" with eroticism "without" the word usually associated with love making.

Great!
George

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 12, 2007

An electrical jolt of sensuality in dynamic lines: well done, Eileen!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

A 'StormSpinner' kinda write: wish I'd written this!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2007

electromagnetic impulse...Pure Electric..Keep moulding and holding...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 11, 2007

I love that picture, and the way you have used it and adapted it (I think) depicts the blessed state of the "primordial" juices and clay of which you speak. You create a mood that is mercurial and quicksilver, with all the frisson and energy that such a shot of pure and unadulterated love surely gives. Excellent, TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 11, 2007

Perfect offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

Like making the bread of life, mixing, kneading, molding and then... set all right by the heat of the passion furnace.
Most be eat warm.
Georg

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

the picture, electrifying, the poem, exquisite.

thanks,
dan

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

passion penned perfectly

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

Okay, I need to go wake my husband up after reading this hot poem. This was juicy! ~ Sara

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

Wow. . now that got my morning eyes to open! Is passion your REAL middle name? loved it!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

A passionate write my friend, penned to perfection...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

Together we are magical motion
powered like electromagnetic impulse
with friction, suction,thrust, mingling
in passions primordial juice...

WOW!

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

wonderful write of unbridled love. electrical passion held in thunder's grip. makes for great closed eyed thoughts. I really enjoyed reading this.

thanks,
randy

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 10, 2007

As usual I loved this beautiful poem. GBQ

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

This is beautifully written and it brings many
images to mind.
Wow the passion and sensuality in this piece
Very Very juicy
Outstanding write my friend I LOVE IT!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you...Morning Star

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

Very beautiful picture of love unyoked.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

Powerful passionate write.
Wow, never saw a picture like the one here
Hugs and more hugs, and maybe a kiss or two...

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

Such passion...great write.