Romance like bubbles in champagne tickle my thoughts with lively refrain images of scenes roam my brain,like torsos in a tango through dancing rain
Sensations reaching the giddy state where all nerves are seeking to mate attaining rhythm only love can create til passions power takes over to sate
Replete in the sweet realm of afterglow entwined as the moisture stops its flow magical moments when time goes slow contentment that only two lovers know
Now like a whisper of rippling streams minds drift over abundant themes soon asleep,you'll give way to dreams awakening to dawns new sun beams
Eileen, I stand awed at your ability to rhyme so well! (Not because I thought you couldn't do it, but because it is so very difficult for me!) This poem is so very enjoyable!
"like torsos in a tango through dancing rain"
This is bloody good simile Sugar Chum. You are truly a unique poetic voice you know.
God has given you a delightfully palatable ability to express your heart through verse. It's what I love most about this process, I believe - the colors of each individuals soul become the flowers in the fields of our poetic creations. Like beacons of light to a darkened world. How's that simile? (-:
Peace dear friend
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Bountiful expressions in "Romantic themes" poemized the wonders and made it a sublime composition poetized to enchant and inspire.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2007
My goodness, it is amazing when I read a poem which mirrors my own inner feelings and touches the heart so deeply as this exploration of intimacy and love you have penned here. What a gem!
~Butch Howard
Dive into an enchanting adventure! This light-hearted romance will transport you to 17th-century Scotland, where a free-spirited 21st-century heroine brings love & laughter to a stressed-out laird's life - with a little help from the Fae!
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~Carole
Quite Romantic
Sweet flow and rhyme scheme
Love the picture
Always enjoy your musical touch
DWB
You paint a lovely picture of romance; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Susan
This is bloody good simile Sugar Chum. You are truly a unique poetic voice you know.
God has given you a delightfully palatable ability to express your heart through verse. It's what I love most about this process, I believe - the colors of each individuals soul become the flowers in the fields of our poetic creations. Like beacons of light to a darkened world. How's that simile? (-:
Peace dear friend
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Love Tinka
Bountiful expressions in "Romantic themes" poemized the wonders and made it a sublime composition poetized to enchant and inspire.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
~Butch Howard
Thanks,
Dan