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Paradise
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Together we rode the starlit night
Our bodies united with delight
One, in tune with  lovers sight

His touch set the passionate mood
His mouth, in rhapsodic kiss ensued
I became filled with his happenis

Reaching the realms of glorious heights
Surrounded by heavenly candlelight
In Mimosa scented midnight

Two heartbeats like a magic drum
Two souls emitting the same hum
Becoming one in perfect rhythm

As the golden sun began it's rise
We looked into each others eyes
Knowing we had reached paradise

etw-2007


 
 
 
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 Reviews of "Paradise"
Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Romantic and passionate. Good job.
Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
I could see a poetry reading on stage , red curtain behind the reader, candles the only light. The shadows move to and fro on the crimson curtain and these words are whispered in a silent room. GREAT visual this one gives!!!
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Your wit shines through here, Eileen...you couldn't quite resist spicing up this romantic, idyllic poem -- much to the delight of your readers.

A well done treat!
Gina
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Indeed. When two become one. That is Gods gift, or the devils fatal trap if used unwisely..LOL Ed using Peter Sellers ole joke...
Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Eileen, a beautiful romantic writing...caused this reader to be inspired much!
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
so beautiful... like my dream last night. a poem clearly inspired by such a paradise. Dawn
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
A beautiful poem Eileen!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
I became filled with his happenis

WOW!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Beautiful writing sweet lady..enjoy your day...Hugssss
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Wow Eileen there was quite an explosion here in your words, Beautiful write. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Eileen,

Passion explodes in your verses. Bless You My Friend.
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
A harmonious duet...percussion of the heart...and music of romance in the write.
enjoyed...
John
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Nice picture! Two hearts beating as one, so enraptured, so in love, a true "paradise".......

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Calibrated in synch with every sense known to us passionate creatures - sight, taste, touch, and sound...shouldn't all of these senses be present, though, when we consummate romance? Paradise reaches zenith, Eileen...

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Sweet romance. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
HULlo, Eileen, there went me monitor (and me glasses). Holy smokes, you set the Den aBLAZE!!!! Nothing ugly about it: natural. Honest. Beautiful love, blessed by God. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Now this is a real dance of romantic love. Enjoyed
Reviewed by Helen Downey
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
This is just beautiful. I also liked the music that accompanied it.
You really have a way with words. Thanks for a double treat.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Dang, Eileen, you wrote a hot little number here! WHOO HOO!! Well done; I thinks I need a cold shower....Very well done; brava! Love the graphic; pretty!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Damn cool word...(sorry I have not written of late, commenting wise, but 7 day work weeks and 12 hour days make it really hard to come home to much more than to eat, walk Rufuz and go to bed, again) Ed
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Beautiful and romantic Eileen

Love
William
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
So romantic my dear! love Holly
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
I became filled with his happenis That's not a misspelled word. The art is intriguing.He He
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Mimosa scented moonlight is so exotic...and tres erotic. beautiful and passionate Sis as only you can pen.
Love,
Ssuan
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Truly romantic. I like the play on 'happenis' - didn't even have to re-read, caught it the first time. Reaching paradise - isn't that where we all want to be?

Reaching,
Kathy
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
THAT was one exotic and lovely poem from my friend . . . Very good . . .
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
What a nice place to be.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Between you and Amor, it has been a passionate day. This is lovely, Eileen. Every line a gem.

Love,
Bette
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