Making Memories (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Man, I was just on a boat and that didn't happen to me. Achy breaky, poor, poor, pity, pitiful little me. ;-) (Hey! Anothor song!)

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

It is true that some of the best moments are very fleeting indeed... ...perhaps to be continued in another life, another plane. Thank you, Eileen. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

The tryst envisioned in a sweat dream? Passion quenched without attachment? Another silky smooth write E T. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

I like this one Eileen, like strangers in the night
only strangers on a ship ;)

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

I guess this is your poetic version of "The Love Boat" Wasn't that an old Hollywood TVshow once? I'm like more on the "African Queen"! Me & Bogey!
Enjoyed your lighter touch... michael

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Sometimes when two ships pass in the night they can exchange something. You've captured this moment beautifully.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Kind a like in the movies?
great writing Eileen,
with love
until we meet again?
Ronny

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Eileen this is absolutely beautiful, I had to read it over and over, I could feel the breeze from the water and since the love in the air, Thank you for sharing.
Hope you are doing well.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Much to be said for a short interlude between two lonely people and you certainly have brought all the emotions front and center with this most beautiful piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Eileen, a union that left an imprint on your heart and soul, knowing it was just for the moment but the memories will never die. Great images causing this readers imagination to experience some wonderful things. An excellent romantic writing.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

freedom to be in the moment...its beautiful ET

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Secret romantic interludes shared , but not forgotten. Good images and reflections of romance...M

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Sounds like a couple cruises I've taken...but, fortunately they were with my husband; wondrous interludes, nonetheless :o)
Oooohhhh! Shades of the free-love 60s...
Love and Freedom ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Sometimes it is good to feel that freedom, it is the way we should always feel,,, Much to ponder,,
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Wonderful, until the last few lines!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Breath taking lovely lady...have a wonderful and safe day...HUgsss

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Oh Eileen, I've never been on a cruise...thank you for finally taking me. Loved this poem. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Yes, and that is really the way it should be, and life should be lived, instead of hanging on like a possession out of fear of lack, of it happening again, and again, we can all create these moments over and over again, with a bit of finesse, and an open mind, and a pure heart.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Dangit, Eileen, now I'm ready for another cruise!!!!!!!!!!!!! O, this is wonderfully free - love it!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

There is no other sensation like that of total abandonment with another person, realizing what happens there, at that moment, will be only a memory, with nothing else, like strings involved, to mar the acts of unabashed and complete physical satisfaction . . . I have mine, hopefully everyone else has theirs, it is something to reflect back on and smile a teasingly wicked smile about for the rest of your life . . . Stupendous poem . . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Eileen,

Sounds like The Love Boat. Always enjoyed that show but never had the opportunity to go on a cruise. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Like two ships passing each other in the night...

Georg

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Those one night flings have lasting impressions.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Eileen, this is so sensuous from start to finish. I love it!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Lovely poem. GBQ

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

I'd love to see that scrapbook! The pictures would heat up the cruise waters...good to be on this page, Eileen...Blessed Be.

Love Always,
Sage

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Wow! What a romantic interlude!
"making wondrous memories,of a time without inhibition, free to act as they desired, with no holding back,knowing neither one was free, and they'd never meet again"
no emotional ties, no strings, just a beautiful memory. Love it!