Facial Expressions (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

A spicy write, Eileen. I like how you show the progression along the way. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on May 3, 2009

It helps to be handsome, in an early Elvis sort of way. Adam Lambert gets me, and I'm not even gay.

Ron

Reviewed on May 2, 2009

neath the elm of primal desire you built the bed of passion Eileen --you wrote it well and the smile on your face I can plainly see -- this is good stuff my friend -- peace and love-- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 2, 2009

Yes, sometimes just a look can get you going...Nicely done ET
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

... blimey... i'm squirmin in me breeches just reading this one, Eileen!... i must have ants in me pants to get up them stairs! :)) they say that communication is 80 per cent body language, after all... you must be pretty fluent! Bootylicious, thank you. xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Don't you love it when desire's are flamed....this is hot!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Sounds like quite a Master!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Have you been receiving some "herbs" from our lil'brother Jersey Ed, Little Sis? because of lately you have been burning paper like crazy!
Saw you hubby with that "smile" all over his face going by (didn't said hello!)
Poem more hot than a pound of chili pepper in the mouth.

Edvard, the Proper Ole Brother

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Oh my,I love this..well done sweet lady...keep smiling OK...Hugsss

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 1, 2009

Sensual and loving too.

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Ditto on Karla ;)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Whew. A passionate one, Eileen, and very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

very sexy!

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Oh stop it, lol! Love this sensual write. Don't you just adore Spring? Nothing like a husky whisper in the ear. Goosebumps...

Warm Regards,
The Big Sigh

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

This sensual and expressive write is quite a tribute to the one it is about. Thanks for sharing, Eileen. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Eileen,
I'd say you're having a good time, a very good time. Good on ya!
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

My goodness this one is such a delight, very sensual...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Hi ET, Someone must love you very much to be able to write like this. And I don't take hints very well, the hint of smile I would take as sneer, the bottom lip thrust out I would think he was a pouter, lick of the lips I would think he was some kind of a serial guy.. anyway, a stalker at the very least... LOL This romance stuff is where you write your best, ET, and that's why I say that someone must love you very much... you're the lucky one.... stay strong and true, my friend...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

hehe...delicious

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

There are more enhanced methods now available, but this would be the wrong environment to elaborate on that, but I'll give you a small hint later. Bless you, and Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Its been so long since last i was in the bedroom with anyone, other than Rufuz, could you expand on this and tell me what happens next...waiting with bated breath...;-) ed

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

Wao! Passionate, erotic and brilliantly written.

"next you form just a hint of a smile that says
you know i know what you want"

Hmm!