The chocolates are a treat
My love is far more sweet
Flowers for you when we greet
I hope we can take the heat
I love you more than words can say
I want to love and hold you everyday
If time runs out our pure love will not
Let me warn you it's going to get hot
Not so hot that we burn our fingers
Our love shines and forever lingers
When we meet there will be chocolate and flowers
And you I'll cherish and love with all my powers
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Reviews of "A Love Poem"
Reviewed by Maalikaya C (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2007
The chocolates are sweet but yes indeed your love is sweeter!
Just the way true love should be...sweet, powerful, hot, and romantic...with each giving to the other denying thy self....one of my favorite Dave...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Be safe,
Karen
And you I'll cherish and love with all my powers
Sounds like quite a marvelous love story, my friend.
nice.....Art Sun...
Susan
What a wonderful declaration of love!!!!!! I like the rhyme scheme as well!!!!! Well-done, Dave!!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Hugs, Laura
Love,
CJ