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Ethereal Empirical Cries Of Humanity (Quatrain Below it)

by David Lester Young — Read all 1,103 poems by David Lester Young

Humanity is woman made, woman nurturturmed in love, then men come in to screw it up.

I did work a quatrain version out of first piece

Sunday, September 23, 2018


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Ethereal Empirical Cries Of Humanity

 

Whence haste dew lily pads dost drop thy wind flicker flutter heart

Pitter patter thy misty eyes, my liege, I await sunflowers wrought seeds

Petal dye hues, dew sway a-lisp tither thee larking bird trail lit feather

Honey dewdrop swirl bliss water colors, aloft wild flowers whorl winds

Dance my liege amid thy meadow tilling the flower’s songbird twill

Tra La La thy ballet prance’s, mastery tip toes, amid life’s spring of tulips

Long stemmed roses sway adrift melodic harmony pastel love veldt strokes

Chorus bee I am rhymed rhythm, Iambic pentameter aloud dye elocution

Thy bard awaits WordsWorth upon nocturnal stage of Shakesperean wench.

Viola fingered rasp hasp closet of Juliet HeArt in Macbeth Cordelia tragedy.

Feminine vixen, femme fatale flame vamp, poetess enlightened thy woman

Whose nurtured womb birthing chord, wails –

Ethereal Empirical Cries Of Humanity

 

Second version


Humanity Ethereal Empirical Wail Matron Cry Quatrain


Whence haste dew lily pads dost drop thy wind flicker flutter heart sow seedlings

Pitter patter thy misty eyes, my liege, I await sunflowers wrought seeds

Petal dye hues, dew sway a-lisp tither thee larking bird trail lit feather

Honey dewdrop swirl bliss water colors, aloft wild flowers whorl weather,


Dance my liege amid thy meadow tilling the flower’s songbird twill julep

Tra La La thy ballet prance’s, mastery tip toes, mid life’s spring of tulips

Long stem roses sway adrift melodic harmony pastel love lotions

Chorus bee rhyme rhythm, Iambic pentameter dyed elocution


Thy bard awaits WordsWorth upon nocturnal stage of Shakesperean wench.

Viola fingered harp, hasp Juliet HeArt, Macbeth Cordelia retrenched.

Feminine femme fatale flame vamp, poet enlightened femininity

Births nurtured wombs – Ethereal Empirical Cries Of Humanity

 

 

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Reviewed on September 24, 2018
'Love it! I love your style!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 24, 2018
As I read, Tiny Tim's immortal words sung in a high-pitched voice came through to me… "Come tiptoe through the tulips, with me."

Not being a poem aficionado, I couldn't see any difference between the first version and the second, all using the same or similar words. That doesn't mean there wasn't a difference, it's just that the overwhelming number of adjectives in every line makes understanding unclear.

Ron


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