Finite Core Convergence
Center thy mind
mid focal
temporal telepathy
Where everything
radiates pure,
thy center-point
Convergence of
every sense
visceral verse
Poet Tree
Mirror pin drop
radiating insight
universal direction
Where baptismal
bless bliss
Be center of
Poe-creation
Drip drop
pin~drop
crystal clarity
bearing
cerebral core
Tick tock timeframe
of Poet Tree
celestial relevance
Birth~Right
Wordsmith~Right
WordsWorth
rhymester
World~Wide
Word~Wise
finding Zen
Nirvana in sole
Stepping stones rhyme
bearing thy soul
“Finite Core ~
Convergence.”
HeArtMosphere Poet
Finite Core Convergence
Center thy mind mid focal temporal telepathy
Where everything radiates pure, thy center-point
Convergence of every sense visceral verse Poet Tree
Mirror pin drop radiating insight universal direction
Where baptismal bless bliss Be center of Poe-creation
Drip drop pin~drop crystal clarity bearing cerebral core
Tick tock timeframe of Poet Tree celestial relevance
Birth~Right Wordsmith~Right WordsWorth rhymester
World~Wide Word~Wise finding Zen Nirvana in sole
Stepping stones rhyme bearing thy soul “Finite Core ~
Convergence.”
HeArtMosphere Poet
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But your recent Last One Standing version has turned into a game like the CBS so-called Survivor series. And I don't like it. Giving the participants meat, skins and modern bows and arrows defeats the idea of trying to make it in 40 days. If given any of these supplies, they should be given equally on day one and the participants given enough space to go it on their own like the History Channel's better, more realistic, Alone series.
You are losing viewers when you coddle the so-called, best, survivors by giving them meat to share rather than making them hunt or fish for it.
I'm sure other viewers feel the way that I do.
Ron
RonHullauthor.com