his hands move swiftly across the page staining it with the ink of his heart and such a heart….oh such a heart an opulent home where my heart dwells
his hands, slow on the keyboard keyboards are so mechanical, modern unlike the time in which he belongs when sonnets of love were penned with an ink well and plumed quill calligraphy to embellish parchment words to enhance love, amplify passion
his hands clumsy in modern mechanics but never in the ways of love be it written or proven with touch tender yet voracious hands, fingers of fire miracle man of former, more romantic times when chivalry yet lived and breathed and love was all encompassing
a voice of reason, and yet a heart that throws caution to the wind and feels such depths, until his chest can barely confine its expanding love
Well, Turner seems aptly named tonight, though he sounds pretty much a ham-fist to me! :)) An admiring and touching characterisation, Belle, with both awe and sensitive appreciation. You paint the picture of a New Man with an Old Heart for Passion! A truly wonderful combination if you are blessed enough to find it! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Mechanics are good too...........Honest, spec electro mech's... We find all the right places to turn on, and make sure our nuts are tight...
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
you take us there and you do it well
erin woods
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Powerful and beautiful, my friend.
Many Blessings,
~Linda
Michael
Rusty
Love has a texture all it's own but some tend to show it more than others. Excellent poem my friend.