Harp strings are polished, no salt-water corrosion, this needs to be recited with an accompaniment of harp, La Belle, this puffs out the sails in the romance of brogue...a tankard of conversation fluid stout on lager to ya Belle...Cheers!
Belle - this is so well written - the language works so well and the story told is a beauty, very romantic, you write romance so well - 'and on tha endless shore, each new dawn...' well, at least she's up early... very good poem, Belle, Nicky x
Your poem reminds me of the long past days when wives and mothers kept a lantern burning in a window for the sailor husbands, sons. A very romantic write indeed. Enjoyed.
This a beautifully written poem
Your choice of words have painted a picture of romantic
Feelings and longing and love!
Powerful page is filled with passion and yearnings
The soft tender tone and words provide
With excellent Imagery and flow!!
Outstanding Write!!
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend....Morning Star
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
But ain't the trade winds in the middle, that equator thingy, I'm being anal as you guys say..
Love Tinka
Sage
Be safe,
Karen
Your choice of words have painted a picture of romantic
Feelings and longing and love!
Powerful page is filled with passion and yearnings
The soft tender tone and words provide
With excellent Imagery and flow!!
Outstanding Write!!
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend....Morning Star
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Beautiful write LaBelle
peace * love
William
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
The writing is exquisite. It puts one into the feeling of the poem.