And tell me, Beautiful Bard
are you a druid spirit, a priest,
a ruler of olden celt domains?
Do you chart the course of stars
and the path to a lady’s heart?
Do you chant the forgotten words
that open mysteries’ doors
and set afire the hidden elements
deep within a woman’s soul?
Are you an alchemist who transforms
the mundane into golden dreams
and brings to life those vanished days
of kings and the queens they won?
You are no fair faced youth
with foolish fumbling hands
Your beard graced with silver threads
Your love mature, experienced
Aye and would you explore
those olden times in verses eloquent
with kisses sublime
from lady of ripe crimson lips, red silk hair
a poetess to match thee, verse for verse?
Come away with a me, to ancient nights
bold druid priest and celtic goddess
under circling stars and silvered moon
to build our own ageless monument to love
I'm really beginning to track, trace an enjoy your work as you grow in stature almost day top day. Your image-making is superb, your themes ring bells in my heart and your evocation of the depth of longing in a romatic's spirit are impeccable.
the heat of ancient fires upon cliffs where rocks have aged and tell the tales of centuries of mankind - so dwells these words, a voice in the present echoing of spirits and passions that were born in the past. the "feel" of the poem reaches out from the words and into the waiting body.
Oh my..this is exceptional work..
mmmm Belle, you seem to be like wine....your work IS like wine..better with each passing year..
..love this one..am saving it..thank YOU!!
Awesome Knight impressive words of true romance
The beautiful Celtic Goddess will be very thankful
That her wish has finally Arrived!
Love the tone and the words are so romantic!
Brilliant write!!
Love Peace and hugsss...Morning Star
lol. I love it. Well, this Swedish princess is going to go decipher her Nordic runes and see what they will say about all this. I believe, yes, it is a fehu or in other words "ambitions realized." The Celtic goddess will receive her wish. lol. Enchanted again by what lurks in the mind of La Belle Rouge. Liz
You are no fair faced youth
with foolish fumbling hands
Your beard graced with silver threads
Your love mature, experienced
The above is indeed my favorite part of you poem. It speaks to my heart on many levels. This is magnificent, gentle and oh so romantic.
Kathy
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2007
well this Dark Knight is impressed with the Romantic verses you have written and the the way you have painted pictures in my mind-as for dark knight I am no Druid prince but I am a early morning lover :-)
Aye..tis a wee bonny lass you are that steals the heart and imagination of this highland laird who sits on the green of Eire and spins his song of the Clans. In other words well done La Belle.
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Fee
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Love it and look forwards to much, much more.
Keith
well done...
John
mmmm Belle, you seem to be like wine....your work IS like wine..better with each passing year..
..love this one..am saving it..thank YOU!!
Vesna
Love Tinka
Walt
Be safe,
Karen
The beautiful Celtic Goddess will be very thankful
That her wish has finally Arrived!
Love the tone and the words are so romantic!
Brilliant write!!
Love Peace and hugsss...Morning Star
with foolish fumbling hands
Your beard graced with silver threads
Your love mature, experienced
The above is indeed my favorite part of you poem. It speaks to my heart on many levels. This is magnificent, gentle and oh so romantic.
Kathy
hugs
Fee
You know I gotta love it, Belle!
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I envy that druid one that can provoke such gentle feelings.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love you,
Ann