Electric Dreams Part 3 (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 8, 2007

The year 2002! and the Passions still sizzles!
Wonderful writing between the two of you then! :)
Escalating to fathoms!
Love it!
Warmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
Write On!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on November 5, 2007

there is an amazing electricity surrounding these "electric dream" pieces, you two exude passion writing to its zenith

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 4, 2007

passionate & beautiful compliment ...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2007

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 4, 2007

Ravel's "Bolero" come to mind, starting slowly, persistent, nagging like a itch, getting after a while, subtle crescendo like two lovers converted in human slithering giant snakes entangled harder and harder until the explosion came to devour everything as the heart moved.
Some literary collaborations were meant to be.
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 4, 2007

Sweet indeed when two poets souls and hearts blend to create the writes that bring emotions to others hearts. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on November 3, 2007

I had forgotten how beautiful this piece really was and is...I have to be proud of our effort in this...knowing our hearts and souls went into such a classic.
Amor

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 3, 2007

One captivating pen Belle. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on November 3, 2007

A beautiful poetic story of sensual delight between lovers. Beautifully written.

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on November 3, 2007

Great collaboration again, Belle. Sensual and erotic. I can feel the electricity between you two when I read these.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 3, 2007

our two hearts will beat as one in the bond
as my blood and my thoughts mix with yours

Your two pens have mixed fabulously well!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Belle..you KNOW I'm going to ask THAT question don't you..Is it he?

Merged perfection!!!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

This was heavenly! Passion, fire and beauty! Two hearts beating as one! Love like it should be! LOVE! Sissy

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

This is a peice of art! Well done, duet sonnets humming a rythen to the beat of the heart. ;)

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

It is truly beautiful - the words, the visions, the sensuality and the heat of passion.

You, two, are indeed awesome!

Kathy

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Hot n steamy, the neurons must be on overload.....

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Belle and Amor~

Wow! You two rocked the den with this hot, steamy write! WHOO!! Very well penned; brava! bravo! You two make quite the duo!

(((HUGS))) and much love to you both~ As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Well the passion and eroticism continues, I am sure you two are on fire!
Peace, Love, and Light
Amber "V"

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Just like a movie sequel
only this gets better
thanks for sharing Laelle & Amor
you two are great togetrher
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

You two are sure beating as one in this sizzling expose of a poem. Wow!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Such beauty, such passion! The images this delightful collaboration leaves me with are of passionate lovers entwined so totally in one another! Simply sublime! Belle, Amor, my compliments!

Love,

annie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Such passionate beauty in lines of love: well done, La Belle and Amor!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.