i know you can see it in my eyes
the same fire that burns in yours
the reflection of a unique soul
not afraid to go naked in public
it’s that kindred fire between us
that opens the gates of nirvana
seals the love preserved in words
generates our empathetic trust
some have even been labeled
“daughter of the devil” and
accused of dark arts by those
who fear the fire that lights
the crevices of covert thoughts
i see your soul, can you vision mine?
i experience no fear of dark depths
in the heat of your seer’s flame
have i bewitched you, possessed you
in dreams that journey, in and out
the revolving door of your desire?
are you under the spell of my love?
do the fires of my emerald orbs
absolve your fear, free the beast
crouching behind your proper facade?
shall we kindle a conflagration....again?
Belle,
Very beautiful and passionate write. I love your word usage. You have a gift for captivating your reader. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
I like the mirrored flame effect of the merging candle images related to each others souls. A lot of "fire" in this one--perhaps a building flame to a new book, you're overdue!
best, michael
Belle..you've done it again! Expressed the love of souls embracing the wholeness of who they are..mirroring the love to each other..penetrating each others' core..being the flame ..that eternal flame that can never be extinguished..
Love it!
Your words seem to always strike a match under the very core of what being a male having a woman desire you is all about. I felt with this ine you were talking directily to my and had to resist the urge to answer as I read it.
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
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YOur poem brings much to the heart and soul Belle!
May the fire in your soul never go out!
Much love and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Be safe,
Karen
Have I shown you my elephant impression...
Very beautiful and passionate write. I love your word usage. You have a gift for captivating your reader. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Christine
Dee
Gotta love it!!
Hope 2008 will be it sis...thanks!!
Damn Music still acting up..grrrrrrrrrrrrr!!
Love Tinka
best, michael
Carole~
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love it!
vesna :)
Fee
Stoke them coals, throw on a couple more logs and watch it burn.
Walt
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.