Drinkin Cheap Wine Wishin For Champagne (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Drinkin Cheap Wine Wishin For Champagne
by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart → (All Poetry by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart)
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It's Gone Baby, Too Bad....

Drinkin Cheap Wine Wishin For Champagne By La Belle Rouge never had it before.... like I had it with you wanton and wasted on the things you'd do my sheer black stocking ropes midnight�s daring driven desire push and shove....forbidden fire do you want it again, tell me... do you? do you think i can�t sleep needin it too? burn Baby burn, I know you do, thinkin long and hard about how i knew how to give and take, how to make your dark desires and dreams come true Mmmm, sweet night dreams long ago lost we burned to ashes we paid the cost what�s love got to do with lust? danced to the piper and pay we must you couldn't hold on to what you had now it's gone, Baby that's too bad oh it was a monstrous mystery how you could make me need you when you wanted me no it�s not a dance for ballerina dolls on the stairways out in the halls under the sheets or in public view rivers of want, drowning in you Mmmmm, kryptonite explosions pleasure and pain erotic bulldozers we played a dangerous game I hope you miss the lustful lady you aint got and your thirst addiction turns you into a sot when my expensive memory drives you insane drinkin cheap wine wishin for champagne oh it was a scary sweet dream, Baby now it�s just a crazy forgotten fling pullin on your last heartstring yeah it was your secret obsession my darkly domineering lesson ended cause some things are too hot to last its just a decomposing corpse of the past 3/20/2007 La Belle Rouge �Poetry, Raw Emotion� Music 'Sweet Dreams Are Made Of These: �

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 14, 2008

Any man that would turn away from such beauty as you posess must be either drunk or drugged up. I like your style with these. Ya know how to love 'em and leave em with such well written flogging.

Walt

Reviewed by William Bonilla

beautiful and sensual
most enjoyable
Happy Valentine's day
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on February 13, 2008

Wow! I love 'rivers of want'. Neat-o.

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Hottttt write. Very nice.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Visual and sensual with a mixture of a time from the past. Sheish, this was steamy!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

You're so erotically entertaining Belle, bold also, you've lit the whole den up with romance, glad to be a part of it dear. hugs

Reviewed by Selene Skye

Exotic and crushingly gorgeous write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Steamy write, Belle; you've melted my monitor! LOL Very well penned; brava~!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by D Johnson

I heard the whip lashes in the background,, hey do you want some Thunderbird I have left from 71 or was it 72? Nice write.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Ooooooooooooh, la LA! I love the song (boppin' my head along to the music), love the write, all around perfection!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Sweet HOT dreams were made of these!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Ooooo hot and steamy yet with a meloncholy touch, perfect for a Valentine trist, well done as always....

Be always safe,
Karen