Lisette's Journal Part 2 (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2008

The dark stranger emerges, to usher her through the door into a new life. So lovely your writing.

Mark

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Haunting & fantastic!
Sheila

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2008

What an imagination you have! Holly

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on September 4, 2008

Wow his eyes on this picture are very wicket
Just like you described him in this
Poem its enthralling and exciting and
I cant just imagine what she felt when
Neck was brushed with cold fingertips!
Awesome can't wait till I read the next one!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

Very suspenseful and intriguing, can't wait to read the next one.. Nicely done, Bravo, My dear Belle.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Nice photograph, such pearcing eyes...Wow, I am getting goose bumps just reading this, so indepth. Haunting yet romantic overtones, well written piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Now I am going to need a night lite in my room and hubby is going to be peeved off. I just got the chills that I know won't go away La Belle.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Subtle crafts displayed here and the whole atmosphere reminds me of Heathcliff in 'Wuthering Heights' and Stanley and Blanche in 'Streetcar...'
Strong writing, Belle.
John

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

wonderful- i adore dark gothic poetry and tales, sage sweetwater suggested I came into your wonderful house, we are like kindred souls..as I write (or try to) goth too

brava

jill curry

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

sensual and spooky, good combination.

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Very interesting and fascinating !!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

I admire your talent to do this so well, Belle.
I'm afraid I don't have the patience for it,
or the skill. Beautifully done. -gene.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

what a suspensful and well crafted story! Gave me the chills...

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

A dark bite this leaves upon the pulse of time...a time when stalkers came to their prey in a different way...thirsty, lusting for blood coating the tongue...intriguing genre, Belle...you do these so well, too...the key to a writer's success is to not pigeon-hole oneself into one genre, but rather, quill out of the box to pull in different readers...be well La Belle...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Thank you for sharing your creative mind, Belle. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Getting better and better, and what a graphic!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

That pic is scary; so is the music; so is the tension leading up to the Encounter. Very, very well penned, La Belle, more please!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Oh this gave me a mean chill, Belle when he knew her name! Wonderfully written ... hugs

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Wow second chapter even better than the first as the tension and heat steam up the night as to what will come next.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Maybe Lisette shouldn't fignt and surrender to the temptation, after all, pleasure beats pain by that beguiled mile!
Are that ink of yours no frozen yet?

Georg