if words had fingers and lips
they would cross your chest
like fiery arrows, burning trails
bordering pleasure and pain
waking the lion of your youth
with force of forgotten power
and roars the jungle respects
if poetry could kiss you
oh how you would be kissed
with tenderness of first love
lasciviousness of gratuitous lust
breath and souls becoming one
an entire thesaurus of expletives
exploding deep in all your senses
if our words were flesh
we would form our sentences
with two tongues of fire
pens of flame inscribing secrets
on the pages of our hearts
and I would talk you to nirvana
between the sheets of my verses
YUM YUM!!!!!!!!! :)) This is the kind of midnight feasting that wordsmiths enjoy - the delicacies of nouance, meaning and diction that speak in sensual and spiritual tones the languages of eros and hermes; piquant to body and soul. Ambrosial as always, Darlin... Think I'm Doris Day, BTW... have to go back and re-check... But you is one lucky ducky: Richard Burton and his sonorous Dylan Thomas tones would find me Under Milk Wood every night of the year! :)) PillowtalK Kate xxx
... Oh no... Debbie Reynolds... but wish I was Katherine Hepburn!! xxxx
Seduced! Interesting; wonton words is an art nearly extinct when used as aphrodisic foreplay within the confines of a twilight boudoir. Wham bam thank you mam seems to be the norm, yet there are times when lips speak louder than words and when words struggle to define loves true essence. I guess it's all just a process of elimination, but when one's words can create an orgasm you'll surely find them on my nightstand...
Love how you think and write...you write what some of us can only think...dusky and sensouos!
Carole~
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Provocative and seductive poetry indeed; I can hear the whisper of the soft voice in my mind. It is an urge, a calling, and a compulsion to dive deeply and surrender myself. So very nicely done!
Mark
Wow... you always scare the whosits out of me...just can't write like you do...about what you write.... and I admire that talent within you so much.. :-)) wonderful words. lindalaw
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... Oh no... Debbie Reynolds... but wish I was Katherine Hepburn!! xxxx
Love Tinka
John
Word and love ensconsed!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive!
Spoken with love my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
sheets of your verses. -gene.
Carole~
Mark
An intense poem in cryptical mood.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Sandie Angel :o)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.