Lisette's Journal Part 11 (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

Written with an intriguing romantic twist. Love the line describing his skin. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

Not only a nearly Halloween, but a soul, somewhere, telling the truth about real life darkest side, lissette is the alterego of a desire inside a forgetfulness coffin trying to escape, to be free once more.

Georg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

You can never trust a bam-pire nor a war-wolf
I've missed ya Belle.
Keep up the great writing
with love
Ron

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

another excellent excerpt from Lisette's Journal ...

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

La Belle,

Great background music; superlative write . . .!

Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Powerful penned emotions here, Belle; excellent! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

La Belle,

Mixed emotions: hate and lust, desiring what one shouldn't have - a fine line betwixt the two. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

LaBelle,
another fine episode in an already fine series, I've enjoyed each one.
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Wonderful tale, emotions included of intrigue that keeps one sitting on the edge of the seat. Poor Lisette for I fear she does not realize what is yet to come...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

You are a born writer and this is another wonderful but dark poem to go with the season.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

This series is epic. Such talent on view for all to read and at Halloween. This reluctant Lisette adds such tension and suspense. I love it. Liz

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Belle, you continue to write so well as you extend this series.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Another gripping episode that leaves the reader tremling and with cold shivers...and yet a strange tingling down below...hmmnnn.
Fee