Your poem is the beggining of a love affair. It supercedes all desires, passion, and lustfull feelings. Just like the portrait you posted you can trace her bodily outline with the culmination of wanting and longing. Truly amazing words and thoughts put into writing
thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Alain
Your genuine words of emotion really touch upon ones heart and so many feelings come bubbling back to the surface. How well written and endearing this is...
La Belle...
This is totally awesome. I felt each line, each thought, each feeling and each emotion as if it were my ownn. You captured the very subject of forbidden love and took it to it's zenith in that man and woman may not be free to act onn their feelings and emotions but that does not stop them from having them. Great write.
The moth and the lighted candle, the suicidal fly of one trying to escape the dark, the other...the candle...only stays there, waiting, will she feel anything? or after the love incineration she will still burning to attract another one?
The moth was really in the bedchamber of its mind.
Then...what a way to go!
Oh beautiful! just beautiful words cannot express the emotions I went through. I really enjoyed the mental comparison of emotions and the pen. Brilliant! La Belle
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Carole~
Is it yours
that I adores
sweet comes from the pours
Eyes bulging large
at the booty in charge
Tootie fruitie
on what a nice booty
hugs my sweet
MC
thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Alain
Such a pity it's forbidden love! Both tender and passionate, and tantalizing, too, this is very fine writing indeed.
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Forbidden love? What a pity. -gene.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph
This is totally awesome. I felt each line, each thought, each feeling and each emotion as if it were my ownn. You captured the very subject of forbidden love and took it to it's zenith in that man and woman may not be free to act onn their feelings and emotions but that does not stop them from having them. Great write.
hugs
fee
The moth was really in the bedchamber of its mind.
Then...what a way to go!
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love the piccy!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.