I'll whisper to you, Love
sweet forbidden nuances
of passion’s own vocabulary
words not permissible to shout
sighs of tender allusions,
and insistent insinuations
of rivers that flow below
the vision of a cold world
swirling eddies of emotion
to pull you slowly downward
into the vortex of my desire
warm waves of love and lust
silently swathe body and soul
where whispers surface at last
as language of cobalt midnight
I am seduction's soft shadow
mistress of the wild waves
float away on swift scarlet sloop
built of wanton wet whispers
secret siren songs from afar
designing demise of resistance
within aching arms of pleasure
lips ripe red with dream kisses
hungry tongue to travel, taste
each flavor of your love feast
would you ascend rounded hills
shelter in scented forest valley
dive for pearl in ocean depths
where rest the gates of heaven
lie naked in whispers 'til dawn
"warm waves of love and lust silently swathe body and soul"
What beautiful, seductive words that warm me as a man, that make me want to go back into bed with the one I love.
Mark.
Music, words and imagery blend together in this one La Belle to breathe live into a mermaid's tempatation and offer her up to us as a symbol of passion.
Nicely done,
hugs
fee
As soon as I read the title of this piece I was drawn to peek inside and I am glad I did. I loved the imagery and the choice of words in this piece. The flow was smooth and I sensed beauty about the piece as well. There is emotion present, which feels like you are connected to the piece you are writing. I really enjoyed it from beginning to end! Awesome job! Thanks for sharing and keep on writing!
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Loved the nuance of this Seducing poem! and the music/rhythm is Perfect!
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and Poetry, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEE
What beautiful, seductive words that warm me as a man, that make me want to go back into bed with the one I love.
Mark.
That wasn't seduction...but surrender.
Georg
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
So so rich in the language of passion, you excel here, one of my all-time favourites from you. Kudos!
John
Love & peace be with you
William
Nicely done,
hugs
fee
All the best,
Lena
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)